Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God! I can't believe it. I knew that *itch would be trouble. I hope he kills her very slowly. I can't wait for the next update. Advi younever cease to amaze me, this story just gets better and better.

Oh My God, Advi!

    I have read this story upwards of 30 times back when it was still on Fanfiction.net. (Don't know what happened to it, it just.... was deleted one day. I nearly Baww'd. XD.

My point is; I loved it. And I'm so happy you finally ended up putting it back up somewhere.

Look forward to re-reading it again,

    ~Epsilon

Wow, I wouldn't be surprised it Sesshoumaru killed Saya's whole damn family now!

loved it! please update soon! why did they have to lose their first child?

WOW things are so gonna hit the fan. I really can't wait till the bitch gets what coming to her. I hope you have her die a slow and painful death. But thanks for the update and have a happy 4th

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Saya is in deep trouble. There's no way that Sesshomaru would want to be with her anyway. Now the only way Sesshy wants her is dead for killing his unborn heir. I'm sure she heard his cry for revenge. My, my, my, she's a dead youkai walking. Guess I have to wait for Monday. Oooh, so excited. Enjoy your 4th!

OK, That was just mean.  Cliffies drive me crazy.

Can't wait for the next update!

loved it! please update soon!

Thanks for the update, I actually like Toutousai the crazy yet not crazy old man, reminds me of Kagome's grandfather. Man can you image what would happen if those two where to meet. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

I'm loving the story so far. Just a few suggestions. Hi=Hai and sometimes you repeat what you type, be careful.

Wasn't how I thought she would die but glad she gone, one bad character down 2 major ones to go can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the update

 Things are getting really good. Thanks for the update can't wait for the next chapter

I love that Sesshoumaru is cursing. It's too cute and OCC!

I  love your story, it's the second time I'm reading it!!!I love your version of the characters and the respect you have for them.  Honestly, I secretly wished you had made Hojo more presistant.  It just would have been fun to see Sess put him more in his place, but it was a great surprise that he apologised, even though I have read your story on another site it's like I reading it for the first time. You are an excellent writer, your story flows the plot is awesome and as I said eariler your version of the characters are excellent, I've enjoyed getting to konw them.  My fave part so far is when Inu refused to go home because he was bored.

 I'm not much of a reviewer myself, I sometimes review when a story is finished or I have time, or a specific need to such as now.  Ummmh, I didn't read the hateful review that was left for you, it was taken down before I could, but from what I'm reading about it, I don't have to actually read it to understand that it was hateful, spiteful and hurtful.  I don't understand people like that.  I've read some awful stories and reviewed them but never have I been hateful or hurtful, I've been honest and I usually send the review through private message not to embarass the writer.  I have never told anyone not to write, no matter how bad the story is, (I have read some stories that I couldn't read past the first chapter) I try to encourage them to continue to write that is the only way you are going to improve. There is no possible reason to flame someone elses work or anything they do, there are ways to express somthing to someone with out being destructive, there is absolutely no reason to do such a thing. How dare people do that to someone.  Mostly it's jealousy and some people are just plain spiteful!  Anyway, I felt I should congradulate you!  You did not let them stop you from writing your stories, and never let anyone stop you from doing what you enjoy!  Never let anyone get you down! If you do, they won, your above people like that always! This will not be your first awful flame sadly there are people out there who just seem to have made it a hobby to hurt others, you have to stand up and believe in what you do and yourself and more on, ignoring them.  Your an excellent writer,  seem to be a great person and don't let anyone change that, some people are just unhappy with themselves and the only way they can be happy is to bring someone down.  I believe I heard of this person devils advocate before, and that poor, poor, sad  person has nothing better going on in their life so that person has to do their best to try to bring others down and I'm afraid if they do not change they will lead an incrediably unhappy life and bring unhappy children into the world if they live that long, seriously they will make the mistake and mess with the wrong person who is not above kicking the $%#% out of them. I'm above name calling, besides there are no names to fit this persons behavior and attitude, this person is just sad and pathetic and most likely lonely and wishes he or she has your incrediable talent imagination and bravery. (I'm to much of a chicken to post my stories)

 I'm sure I've reviewed your story on another site, I've read this one before and am very much enjoying reading it again! Your incrediable and I truly enjoy your work, keep it up and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!

TO Devil's Advocate:  I'm graduating soon with a degress in psychopsychology, art therapy, I will take you on as my first patient for free if you like, Also, if I were you I would change my name, you are not close to being a devils advocate more like LONELY WITHOUT A CLUE.  I've met the devil and he wouldn't hire you to wash his dog.

I had to leave that little message.  Well you hang in there and WRITE ON!

Much love

InuAngel

wow that was an awesome chap.please keep writing.i'd like 2 read more about kagome and sesshomaru's love

First off, sorry someone flamed you. Flames are not tolerated here. I don't know how people get off being rude. Don't like it, don't read it, I always say. The author Kagome got a flame too, I wonder if it was the same flamer.

Anyways, regarding this chapter: @__@ that was a LOT of sex. That would make them very messy wouldn't it? lol! I think they need a smexy shower time now. Can't wait to read more!! Thanks!!

loved it! don't worry about any flames, just keep on writing your stories. please update soon!

I'm glad to be of help advi. Now i have a favour for you to do...

don't give up even if someone says bad thing like SOMEONE did, coz you have to know that there are lots of us who loves and appreciate your stories...

so...ganbate advi-sensei-sama !

Who the hell is The Devil's Advocate anyway? How dare he/she critic your story. BAKA 

fan fiction is based of your imagination that yourself create. What purpose that he/she give bad comment and say that like he/she owned dokuga?

Dokuga is for everyone not for IDIOT that think he/she own it. VERY IDIOTIC PERSON

If that person want to critic the story don't give comment that make writer feel low and embarrassed her, give a good advice NOT bloody hell badmouth her.

Do not worry Advi you better ignore that The Devil's Advocate, after all he/she is IDIOT that cannot spell LITERATURE very well

I LOVE YOUR STORY VERY MUCH. Please updated next chapter quickly I want to know what happen next

If that bastard The Devil's Advocate give you bad comment again, IGNORE it after all you have more loyal reader that support for you story (like me).

Ignore that insignificant bastard The Devil's Advocate after all he/she only want you to fail (the name that he/she give is like him is really idiot, evil and bastard) (>_<)