hah I loved it. Kagome's reactions were rather funny. Moved a bit fast, but it is a one shot. Anywho it was good and if you're that good at trying things for the first time, maybe you should try new things more often.
Nice writing! If it was me, I would have thought Sango was somehow responsible for the embarrassing gifts, and done something really bad in retribution. Good thing Kagome is not so suspicious! I'm glad Sesshomaru was not just playing Kagome, finding her predicament amusing. That's what I was afraid of. But he came through like a champ! Lucky girl...
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