Masterful! Your descriptions are poetry; a rich, wild ride of imagery. I could feel the wind and the rain and the thunder in my bones...and not just cuz it's been raining all day! Excellent writing, Tal, I am very proud of you.
On another subject: quit apologizing for anything. You are the author, this is your story and you need to write it your way. You put in what you feel should be there and what you are comfortable writing. If someone is unhappy with it, then they can deprive themselves of the treat and quit reading!
Gosh, the situation is getting good. If this story follow the song, well, I guess the next chapter will be so good. I can't wait for it.
Whoa! Hot to trot and knows the race course!
Tal, this is really good. I like the pace you've set. It's so sad that they've each lost someone they loved, but life doesn't have survivors. I look forward to the next chapter.
Jo (Chapter 3) - Thu 20 May 2010
*grins*
Oh definitely looking up!
I won't go looking up the lyrics for the song, cuz I don't want to know the ending.
I found it interesting that Kagome looked 30. That was a curve ball in itself.
Of course Toga would trick both parties into spending the summer together... Wait, the dad set them up? *narrows eyes* In romantic interest or just to be a pain to Sessh? Hmmm...
I guess we'll have to wait and see eh?
... Uhm, yes, I am Canadian...
Heh *rubs back of head*
Anyway!
The story looks to be promising, I was looking forward to seeing the children in full makeover mode, but maybe Kagome will get a chance at that anyway.
Can't wait for the next update!
Ooh this sounds interesting so far so keep up with it lady! And I must say it's different to have an older Kagome compared to a younger Sesshomaru, but I guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter to see where it goes.
Tal! You made a mistake!!! An actual mistake!!!! You've never done that before. O.O ---> Kagome glanced at the inuyoukai, and noticed the look on [your] his face. (Yes, you get to abuse me, deservedly. LOL)
This is very good and I LOVE the title of this chapter cuz I really do equate cows with some level of hell. They're only good for steaks, butter, milk, cheese and buttermilk!
Tal, how could I have doubted you? It's good. I'm enjoying it. I'm even putting it in my files so I can re-read it at will without hunting through cyber-space for it.
Okays, it's good so far, even had me laughing, which shouldn't be unexpected, you being you. I'm getting into it.
REDWOLF (Chapter 2) - Tue 18 May 2010
Wow, great story...is Kagome really 30 something?
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