Reviews for Dragonfly by Missy B

sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Aug 2010

So.... yeah i see you have no reviews so i'm going to, that was good but very rushed it was just too rushed i think for me to relaly love it, i liked it but i thought that it needed more. You have her raped by naraku and she's then a sexual preditor in a way, cursing, and violent, while some of that would be warnted, it was just a bit too fast for it to really work well. i dunno. this has potential but needs more. - r0o


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