Very cute drabbles and would love to see you extend on the first one. I think it would make for a very interesting beginning.
These were very well done. I could almost feel the heartace she was going through in the first one, and I'm extremely happy that it had a happy ending. The second chapter was extremely cute. These were very well done, great job!
Very good! I like how you give details, and also how you pay attention to details!
I like your style of writing and really wish to read/see more from you so please keep up the good work.
I would have to say that my favorite would be Billow...I could picture Kagome's face when she saw Sesshoumaru coming out of the smoke.
This was very good. I like the descriptions you gave it really lent alot to the emotion of the drabble and it flowed very nicely. I look forward to reading your next one.
LOVE LOVE LOVE! It was amazing to read, and even though it was just a drabble, i was on the edge of my seat as i finished reading it. Imagery was amazing! i felt like i was there watching it happen.
WOW.... Intense. I can just imagine Sesshomaru rising form the flames like a heroic Phoenix. There was one line that I thought was a little awkward, but maybe it was just me. I'll bring it up though, just in case it proves helpful to you: When you wrote "Yells surrounded her..." I felt like "yells" didn't fit. "Shouts" "Harrowing Cries" "Terrified Screams" ...something like that I feel would have flowed better. But again, maybe it was just me. I really loved this drabble.
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