this is a good, great, wonderful story i love and like since i first started reading this story, your a very great, wonderful, good author who wrote this very great, wonderful, good story!
Good story so far. Please update soon, i would like to know what happens next. Thanks.
ashley (Chapter 3) - Thu 01 Jul 2010
Wow that was really good please update!
Serena (Chapter 3) - Thu 01 Jul 2010
loved it! please update soon! i really want to know what happens next
Diane (Chapter 3) - Thu 01 Jul 2010
Kinda hard to read since for some reason the formatting has been stripped so it's all 1 long run on sentence. It also has quite a few spelling errors which I was rather surprised to see since the previous chapters had few if any mistakes of that sort as far as I remember.
Serena (Chapter 2) - Thu 10 Jun 2010
loved it! please update soon! i really want to know what happens next
Diane (Chapter 2) - Thu 20 May 2010
I like it but it does have some technical problems, like it obviously hasn't been spell-checked since there are quite a few spelling errors, like immediately in chapter 1 & in chapter 2 it's kinda odd to read because it's all centered, also down where Sess is having his wet dream you have a word choice error; menstruations should be ministrations. Menstruation is the technical term for your period or cycle. Also sent is like sent a package & scent is a smell.
Brandie (Chapter 1) - Mon 03 May 2010
Ireally like this chapter and can't wait to read more
Kera (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Apr 2010
That was awesome! Please updae soon! ^^
Fortress (Chapter 1) - Fri 23 Apr 2010
Could use a lot of formatting help -- it is a bit disconcerting trying to read huge blocks of unformatted text.
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