Reviews for Breaking by SilverontheRose

LadyoftheLemons (Chapter 1) - Wed 03 Jul 2019

Hairann (Chapter 1) - Wed 27 Oct 2010

Again I say wow.  I am usually very picky about poems, I tend to prefer that they rhyme, but not in this case.  It is beautifully written, has great flow and I absolutely loved it.  Keep up the amazing work.


Dragoness (Chapter 1) - Wed 27 Oct 2010

I liked this it was very nice.  You described everything in a very fresh and new way.  I like that.  Keep up the good work I can't wait to see what you come up with next.


Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Mon 25 Oct 2010

This was very well done, I enjoyed how you told two stories in one, and very tastefully alluded to the act they were performing ;). Again very well done!


Miss Anna (Chapter 1) - Mon 25 Oct 2010

Again I am liking your oneshots! You wrote this story/poem/oneshot in a very and I do mean very tasteful manner which is good! Sometimes author's tend to be to crude but you have managed to smooth away the edges to refine it so that all ages may actually read this...good job!


MoxyMikki (Chapter 1) - Sat 23 Oct 2010

its funny I was just describing your other piece as poetic, and here you've actually done one! I knew there was a poet in there! ;) I like the cadance you have set, and using italics to more softly speak certain lines was clever. I like the intimacy of that technique. Very enjoyable. Thank you!


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