How bittersweet and absolutely beautiful...

Wow, just wow.  Your descriptions were absolutely beautiful.  So much, in such few short words is amazing.  There is so much depth and emotion within this drabble, a great feat considering how little actual story line there is.  I would not change a single thing.  It is perfect.

Ahhhh, this is so sweet.  I love all your descriptions it gave so much more feeling and meaning to the story.  I love that he still loves her even though she has gotten old and gray.  This was really nice and super romantic.

This was very enjoyable to read. I liked the fact that you tackled the age issue with Kagome, and I loved how sweet Sesshoumaru was to her. Other than a few grammar errors , this was also well written, I will look forward to more of your work in the future. Well done!

That was very good, I would actually picture Sesshoumaru and Kagome while reading your story and for me that is all a good thing, because it means your story (the author) has pulled the reader in and has weaved a very nice story. It flowed easy while reading it, and for being unbeta'ed there honestly wasn't alot of mistakes. There were a few but they are easily corrected.

Example: Autumn has passed so quickly… He
All you would have to simple do is... Autumn has passed so quickly...he

I loved the story and I wish to read more of your work! Keep up the good job!

Very meaningful drabble. I think that too often authors forget the significance of Sesshomaru's love, where it concerns Kagomes mortality. We (authors) like to clean things up by turning Kagome into some ageless person, by either turning her immortal or completely ignoring the fac tthat Sesshomaru will not age, where Kagome will. And I'm one of those authors whose made that blunder, quite often. Its not EASIER to write the way you have here, addressing such issues so elloquently. Only one suggestions, and thats to watch your tense usage. I REALLY enjoyed this story. Thank you!