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Banana (Chapter 14) - Thu 22 Apr 2010

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omg you have to finish this soon!

omg omg omg

 

this is just so awesome, I want to dance! >_<


wiiTneSs (Chapter 13) - Thu 22 Apr 2010

So sweet! Love the development between Kagome and Sesshoumaru.


miss.undo (Chapter 13) - Thu 22 Apr 2010

nice please update i like it! ")


REDWOLF (Chapter 13) - Wed 21 Apr 2010

I just love the Kag/Sess spats. I hope there is more!


Trouble_In_Shangri_la (Chapter 13) - Wed 21 Apr 2010

That was far too cute :)

 

Inu and Sess playing volleyball with that Kano guy...hahaha, kick his ass!


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 13) - Wed 21 Apr 2010

Go Kagome!!!  Way to kick some demon butt XD  So nice of her to set the brothers up, lol.  Huzzah for Sesshoumaru being back!


Rikayu (Chapter 7) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

ohhh i love this chapter!  A game of tag!  It's so Kagome to get Sesshoumaru to be it~  I love this story so far!


Lilly Akame (Chapter 12) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

This is good as :) You do Sesshomarus and Kagomes character so well :)


Hesunohana (Chapter 12) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

I love this development !! really !

 

Inuyasha, still the "withe knight in armor" or nearly... (laugh) maybe the knight isn't the one Kagome thinks.


FayeMegan (Chapter 12) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

Cuute. I like the progression btw. =D


Trouble_In_Shangri_la (Chapter 12) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

De Nile, it isn't just a river ;)


daapatemysoul (Chapter 12) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

I don't know if I've bothered to review before or not, but this is a good fic! I'm rather picky about what I read and comment on, and this fic is a fun one to read. The characters are developing slowly but surely, and are staying fairly true to form. Especially how Sesshomaru was trying to deny his thoughts about Kagome, and how Kagome thought about Inuyasha. I look forward to seeing more, and watching their relationship grow. I'm guessing Sessh will be rejoing the tachi in order to be with Kagome? Because I suspect Rin misses little Shippo- it's a built in playmate when they travel together, after all.


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 4) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

'When humans did stupid things, Sesshomaru killed them.'

That is officially my favorite sentence EVER in all of fandom.

It's very cute, and seems to be progressing nicely. I enjoy the simplistic style you've decided to stick with. A lot of authors try to gloss up their stories with too many big words and an overabundance of description (shamefully, I'm guilty of doing so on a regular basis, but I'm trying to fix that). While it works well in the right situation, a lot of the time it just seems uneccessary and a bit of an overkill. Thank you for sticking to the basics!

Now, on to read more!!


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 12) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

I think the characterizations are very good, and they seem to be developing nicely too; nothing too fast, but not too slow either.  Sesshoumaru is reluctantly coming to terms with being attracked to Kagome, but I think it's great that he's not the only one that seems to be in a bit of denial ;)

Wonderful job!


beckyducky (Chapter 12) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

OMG I loooove you for updating!!! <33333333333

 

I normally dont read drabbles... (they're too short~!!)  But your's is just very funny and interesting to read.  Please update soon!! 

 

This review kinda sucks ass but I really cant pick out errors or anything.  And as far as you being lazy is concerned, I dont think you're lazy at all if you choose to finish chapter after chapter and update so quickly!  Kudos to you!


Angelicatt (Chapter 12) - Tue 20 Apr 2010

Yasha is a lot smarter than most people let on...oh yes, smexy Sess - Kagome is not some silly weak human...you want her...hehehe


Lexie (Chapter 11) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

lol!! hilarious!

please update!!


Lady Fae (Chapter 11) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

It's really good so far, I just wish the chapters were longer. The story is getting really interesting and a little more detail would be awesome.

Keep up the good work!


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 11) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

Oooo, methinks our demon lord got a wee bit jealous!  It was mighty cute and audacious at the same time XD  How dare he leave without saying goodbye!  LOL

Well done!


Trouble_In_Shangri_la (Chapter 11) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

Fluffy got JEALOUS! AHAHAHA!


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