I never knew such simple words could convey such powerful, deep emotions, and sincerely thank you, dear Safire for writing this amazing piece. The final lines to the poem were exceptionally powerful, but thankfully, it turned out to be a good ending. Loved it! :)

AWWW! Saffie! That is just amazing! I totally loved it, and you did an amazing job! I loved how the title was repeated in the poem, and how it...separated the time line? I dont know what I mean, but I really loved this poem! The story in it is really really...thats it. I want a thesaurus. Badly. Did I even spell that right? I cant convey what I want to say, but I hope you understand. I just started these in-depth reviews, and your my first! XD Sorry, I'll get better I swear!

@___@ omg Saffie that is so awesome! I love it and it's soooooo sweet!!!! Great job!!