I really, really liked this story. Kagome is adorable and so cute. And her and Sesshomaru's meet cute is awesome and their subsequent meeting is absolutely perfect. I did notice some glaring and wince-inducing typos, however, such as Renaissance spelled as something else and foul misspelled as "fowl" (which means chicken/duck/goose family, FYI).
But I was still able to enjoy your story regardless. Anyway, keep on writing and honing your craft.
Awesomeness.
absolutely lovely! I love the way kagome pranked kouga like that and very glad that she managed to get a different and possibly better job, and one that lets her work wtih sango, the distribution of characters was well done and i love the way sesshomaru and kgome kicked off their maybe relationship, you hit just the right note, only potential complaint was that i wish i knew what happened between kouga and ayame
Bailey (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011
I caught a typo and thought you should know. I do believe that Kagome and Sesshy were walking out into the crisp fall air not the crisp fall hair as they apear to be doing now. Well, I suppose with Yura in the story it may possibly be hair...
flitterbugz (Chapter 1) - Sat 29 Jan 2011
awww! i just adored that! will u make a sequel??? it was perfectly written!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! SERIOUSLY ONLY ONE CHAPTER SOOOOOOOO NOT FAIR I WANT MORE!!!!!!
Very good one you should be able to tell by that bit of dioloug above
hahahahaha I love it! great work!!!
I can only say that less than ten FanFics have ever made me laugh so much i cried.....Thankyou very much for a much needed laugh......I also read your other fic and it was completely entertaining as well (I hope you update soon with that fic)....But this fic was well written and a perfect form of humor......I smile for you :D
Darkness :D :D :D :D
Ruriame (Chapter 1) - Sun 04 Apr 2010
I really liked that. It was a cute little story. I like how you used minor characters like Yura and Shiori because their roles, although small, added to the feel of the whole thing. And the dialogue was great. I could envision the scene with the words Kagome said particularly. Nice job ^_^
SEB (Chapter 1) - Sat 03 Apr 2010
Thanks for the fun read!
that was cute as hell!
Indie (Chapter 1) - Sat 03 Apr 2010
Delightful. It's not the typical office fict, like I have seen so many times. And yay! Kagome has a backbone. Nice job with the dialog flow and chracterizations. I throughly enjoyed reading this.
That was cute! I really enjoyed it.
I loved it! ^-^ I can't wait for more stories from you!
Neva (Chapter 1) - Sat 03 Apr 2010
very cute story! characters and plot were nicely developed, not too little or too much. i definitely like the ending.
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