Awww...what a nice start to this!!! I am sure that feeling love would seem like a chink in the armor for someone with control as tight Sesshoumaru. I really liked this. You use language very well, and I like the descriptive words very well. I am always a fan of someone that can sculpt a picture for me with words...it can be so rare with fanfiction. Keep up the great work!
hahahahaha you hafta mek miro get popcorn or something chips from her bag, like its a show when yasha finds out! i cant wait for more! - r0o
w0ot! idoit! i'm s0o0o0o glad she's not his any more! you better get to writing more on this onna! b/c r0o's almost out of chapters to review on >:3 and i likes this!
O_O I'm so totally in love with this chapter! :3
maaaaaaaaaaaaa tease! 100 words *dies* stupid yasha!
YUSSSSSSSSSSS go jaken! stupid inubaka!
i like that she tried to glomp him, thats so very Kagomeish in my mind.!
oh i LOVes this!
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