-pouts- you NEED to continue this, It is.. AWESOME
Why is everything in cursive letter? lol
Anyway, it's kinda... interesting. Definitely get a beta though lol :P Hope your block is diminished by the end of.... this second!!! gone? :P no? damn xD
update soon! ^^
xoxo
I like the idea, but I MUST PROTEST YOUR USE OF THE YOUR/YOU'RE. You said "you're" when you meant "your" and in the first chapter you wrote "your" when you meant "you're." >.< Sorry, don't mean to be rude, it was just killing me is all...
>:3 *giggles*
sakurachan_1 (Chapter 2) - Thu 06 May 2010
I was expecting a longer chapter...
but overall it was good and to the point.
Keep updating!!!!
I already like the mood of the story
Yay an update xDDD
Lol, you'll find a way around that writer's block eventually.
Hang in there :P
Jazzy xoxo <3
Karli (Chapter 2) - Thu 06 May 2010
almost got hit 3 times made me laugh, i will wait for the next chapter.
I look forward to what kagome is going to next, and no more writer's block mate.
Cheers
Karli
Daww that was awesome, your plot is wonderful.
I'll be watching for you next chappy, take your time of course :P
Karli (Chapter 1) - Mon 03 May 2010
Hey Hey
oooo Great story, and i hope to read the second chapter soon.
Cheers Karli
sakurachan_1 (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Apr 2010
=D
i think this fic has potential...
keep up the good work!!!!!!!!
wow! Interesting fic!! I hope you continue it!!
Seriously, i love this!!! Most of what i've been reading lately have been really angsty and sad, but this is promising to be fun, light hearted and very entertaining to read! I am sooooo eager to read the rest of this, and i'm sure roo will love this too! Keep up the good work, this is brilliant!!
I love the plot so far! So mysterious. Keep it up!
oh ho ho! i loves this >:3 i cant wait to see where it goes!
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