I just started reading this today, and I really am enjoying it! It has a little bit of everything, including our dear Sesshoumaru making a total ass of himself.
I look forward to reading more of this gem, keep up the good work :)
Uh-oh what does Sesshoumaru have planned up his sleeve now??? Hasn't he already bothered Kagome enough? I absolutely love the interaction you have with Rin and Inuyasha in this chapter but then what's not to love about Rin anyway!! Great job I look forward to the next one!
This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read!
Diane (Chapter 1) - Fri 12 Mar 2010
Unless it's deliberate you have a goof, both times you metioned Sess by name you have it as Sesshomura instead of Sesshomaru or Sesshoumaru whichever you prefer.
I like your story. Its different but still good. Hope yo update soon.
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