This chapter is one of the Best I’ve read. I love that you tackled this subject and did it so well. LOVE.
I love the fact that each of your oneshots have as much detail and character development as most full length stories on here.
Especially with how your willing to take risks in your stories and painting the perfect sess as an everyday person with flaws and disabilities.
Sex in the rain...ooooow...that was fantastic! And sexy!
You're a wonderful amazing writer how could you write them this way....this was sooooo sexy!
Kristen (Chapter 3) - Sat 11 Jan 2014
I hope Sesshomaru is. And I wish there were continuations to all of these, or even just another chapter. You're an amazing writer with a copious amount of talet. I'm definitely going to be rereading some of your other work.
Kristen (Chapter 2) - Sat 11 Jan 2014
I'm seriously going to pass out, but I had to finish this chapter. I can't believe it has been so long since I read these. I missed them, but I'm happy it's been long enough that I can reread them and still be surprised at things that happen.
Kristen (Chapter 4) - Fri 10 Jan 2014
Soooo...I just reread this...And I'm freaking out. So many stories have been exploding my head leately. I am so happy I found this again because I loved it so much the first time. None of the key words I used in trying to find it were working, and I think it has something to do with the fact that it isn't an individual story with its own individual summary, so I couldn't look it up that way. Oh, well, I found it anyway :] Sorry for any grammatical errors...Since this site doesn't tell me if I'm wrong :[ (I fail and am lazy)
I have to say that this chapter interested me from the beginning all the way towards the end. I loved it. Great work. (^_^)
auroraslight (Chapter 4) - Mon 28 Nov 2011
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! I am thoroughly addicted!!!!!!!! Your talent truly shines!!
auroraslight (Chapter 2) - Mon 28 Nov 2011
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for so lovingly, and honestly writing this incredibe story! Love Peace and Blessings to you! Please continue to let your talent shine!!!
Thank you again!
lashon (Chapter 4) - Thu 16 Jun 2011
This is GREATTTT!!i especially loved chap 2 and chap 4. I learned alot about people with disabilities reading this. You did a great job!
Kristen (Chapter 4) - Tue 25 Jan 2011
Wow, that was just...Amazing. Just spectacular. All of these little one-shots have just been so great for me that it was hard for me to stop reading them. And that last one...It was so passionate and read so well, I'm blown away.
Kristen (Chapter 3) - Thu 20 Jan 2011
These were all so amazing :] Great work!
I heard losing one sense sent all your other ones into overload, touch would be good to one to send into overdrive. I love these one shots, i just never really stopped to review, but know this, every single one was awesome, lemons rule!
Very detailed and very engaging. I loved every minute of it.
BloodValkyrie (Chapter 4) - Fri 18 Jun 2010
This could be a Lifetime movie! I love it!
BloodValkyrie (Chapter 2) - Fri 18 Jun 2010
I've never had to use a wheelchair in my life. Also, I've never been close to anyone in a wheelchair. I still found this story to be deep, touching, and sexy. I love it!
dayna (Chapter 4) - Wed 19 May 2010
uh beautiful, just beautiful. Stories like these make you appreciate all the little things that you have, even things such as eyesight. I love the fact that even without sight Sessy and Kagome were able to experience the world and it be just as beautiful or even more so than if we were experiencing it. It really makes you think. And I love the fact that you did that in all of your stories.
I KNEW I recognized your writing style!! I read "Risks in the Dark" long ago on SS & always remembered it for its uniqueness. I enjoyed reading it again though. Love your work!
Ahhhh... very good depiction. Having a bad sight can change a person, they become a walking pity party, or they adjust... and then they can discover what all their other senses have to offer.
I only wish I could have sex with a bad-sighted person. He could at least understand why I like to take my time feeling my partner with my hands before even getting... erm... to the point.... (ahem...)
Anyway, I just wanted to point out something, not really a flaw, but as you seem to be a perfectionist, I thought I could tell you: I don't think a siberian husky could fit in the role of Sesshomaru's guide dog. Not because it's impossible, but because Sessh is such a tall man, and huskies are a middle-heighted breed. Shesshomaru would need a bigger dog, if he didn't want to be bend in two while walking with his dog. So, if you want to stick to the image of a "northern" breed, he could use an Alaskan Malamute more easily... I think. (and malamutes are far calmer dogs too, sturdier while huskies are faster...). I don't know if my last explanation made sense, I'm afraid my English is a little jumbled... I'm a little tired and English is still not my first language...
Anyway, all those stories were very... um.... sensual and well written, no rampaging OOCness or anything distastefull. Good job Lass!
Dewa mata
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