Oh wow. . . i'm just, i'm blown away. You're writing is incredible, and your storytelling of these two - extraordinary. Your knowledge and intelligence of the sea in "In The Blue" and especially ETS is excpetional. I can only sing your praises! However since I stayed up all night last night reading your other fic, "Embrace The Silence" and was completely glued to my chair ( I literally sat in that thing for hours until i caught up - yup, ur that good) . . .i seem to finally be brain dead. Still, simple and sweet - thank you for writing "Into the Blue". I enjoyed the whole thing, and came out beaming - I think my cheecks are permanatly sunburned however, from blushing for the last few hours straight. Please keep up the wonderful work! I'm officially your newest fan. <3 Hope to read more from u!
Syk759 (Chapter 1) - Sun 18 Apr 2010
Absolutely adored it. :)
Admittedly, the characters strayed a lot from what they were in the actual series, but if this could become a separate movie or novel with name changes and a few changes in description!!! I loved the developement and, as always, I'm undeniably a huge romantic, the loving moments and sweet interactions had me smiling and sighing. As for the drama, my god the draaama... Seriously, if this were a novel and made longer and more detailed.... I would so buy it.
Loved it. <3 :]
iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 1) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
This was incredible. As always, you leave me with such a wonderful feeling after reading one of your works! No matter that this was veeeeeeeery alternate universe, it was so well written and creative. Thank you for sharing this with us!
That was a great take on Splash!!! I really enjoyed reading!!!
I really love this story. For a minute I thought that you might end it with him having to leave her to go back to the sea but then I realized that I could scroll down more and then read that he comes back. So that made it even more of a yay moment.
Wow, this was really beautiful. So sad, yet ended happy, yay!
This is such a fantastic tale. I was hoping, when I was nearly at the end, that you wouldn't leave it as a bittersweet tale. I'm glad that you did finish it off with the ending up together, even if there were sacrifices made to make it possible. The detail is also fantastic, especially when you delve into the actual anatomy of the merman. Too few authors dive into such specifics. Lovely story ^^
This story was so BEAUTIFUL!!! It was a very enjoyable read! This is making it into my favorites! I simply loved everything. It was truly a magnificient piece of work! I thank you for writing such a great story I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!! XD
~ MoonFlower77
Oh gosh, this is the best oneshot I have ever read and I always love a story about merman. You wrote beautifully and the way you describe the emotion and their situation are awesome. This is by far the loveliest story I ever read. It made me tingle and feel all fluffy. XD Great work.
This story made my heart race with every single detail and emotion drawn out so beautifully by you, amazing author. I love the details put into it and the creativity behind the storyline. Also, I really appreciated the fact that you did not hold back in making the characters suffer. It was realistic and overwhelming at the same time, and you know a story is a good one when it can do this to you. I thank you for this wonderful read!
Awww...how sweet!!!!!
Wow. The story is beautful. The way you describe everything. Its wonderful.
That was beautiful!! And so very original. You did a great job. I loved every minute of that.
Absolutely beautiful! It is obvious from the descriptions that either you dive or are very close to someone who does. It is not often that the descriptions match the reality of the experience. An excellent story, sure to be a favorite of everyone who reads it.
Beautiful! I'm so glad that you were inspired to write this! It made me remember why your Bliss series is still one of my favorite after so long.... MWAH!
O_O i'm so glad naraku died! this was amazing, and interesting! merman smex. awesome! >:3
Kagome357 (Chapter 1) - Wed 10 Mar 2010
This was very beautifully written and I enjoyed it very much.
On a side note, please forgive the fan poodling, but when I heard you were on this site, I had to come over to see if it were true because I honestly couldn't believe it. There are only four writers that I've ever encountered that I've been in total awe since discovering fan fiction: Demonlordlover, Rinsenternalsoul, elle6778 and you. For a split second, I considered rejoining this site just to be able to talk to you. I was a mere reader new to the concept of fan fiction until I read "Risks in the Dark" over on Ficwad and instantly became a Sess/Kags writer without ever having written a single word. I want to thank you so much for inspiring me to fall in love with this couple and writing my works. I dedicated my first story to you and as I prepare to leave the fandom behind, I'm finally glad to be able to say how much you have influenced me and I'll appreciate it always long after I put my pen down.
Sorry for the awful poodling but again, thank you for everything.
Kags357
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