I love your story. You do such a good job of potraying the emotions of the characters.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

Your story is gonna be epic!!!!!! I love how it flows. Stupid Inuyasha deseverd what he got and more. You should have let her kill him but then there would be no story I guess. Please continue. I'm super eager to know what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now I'm curious ..who died and who does she have to kill?

Great start! I am anxious to read to next chapter and see where it goes....and what promises she is going to keep!

Oh i definitely enjoyed this first chapter, and already can't wait to see the rest of this lil' gem! I want to know what the promises are?, Why she left?, Why it sounds like Kagomes been avoiding her family for a few years? and who exactly are the promises to!!! I'm very keen on reading the next chapters as this sounds like it could be one very interesting story, keep up the good work!!!

I like your narrative style. It flows very smoothly and engages the reader. So far the scenario is intriguing and I look forward to sseeing the story unfold.