TekoloKuautli (Chapter 4) - Mon 27 Nov 2017

Aww It was awesome. I hope you one day continue this :D


Saiya (Chapter 4) - Wed 21 Oct 2015

So Awsome


Hesunohana (Chapter 4) - Sun 08 Aug 2010

I just love tha last sentence !


Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Sun 11 Jul 2010

great story, gald it got updated.please update again

 


Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Sun 11 Jul 2010

great story, gald it got updated.please update again

 


Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Sun 11 Jul 2010

Pretty good story but you need a beta badly. You keep using seize when you men cease. Sieze means:

1.
to take hold of suddenly or forcibly; grasp: to seize a weapon.
2.
to grasp mentally; understand clearly and completely: to seize an idea.
3.
to take possession of by force or at will: to seize enemy ships.
4.
to take possession or control of as if by suddenly laying hold: Panic seized the crowd.
5.
to take possession of by legal authority; confiscate: to seize smuggled goods.
6.
Also, seise. Law. to put (someone) in seizin or legal possession of property (usually used in passive constructions): She was seized of vast estates.
7.
to capture; take into custody.
8.
to take advantage of promptly: to seize an opportunity.
9.
Nautical. to bind or fasten together with a seizing.
–verb (used without object)
10.
to grab or take hold suddenly or forcibly (usually fol. by on or upon): to seize on a rope.
11.
to resort to a method, plan, etc., in desperation (usually fol. by on or upon): He must seize on a solution, however risky.
12.
to have moving parts bind and stop moving as a result of excessive pressure, temperature, or friction (usually fol. by up): The engine seized up from cold.
Whereas, cease means:
–verb (used without object)
1.
to stop; discontinue: Not all medieval beliefs have ceased to exist.
2.
to come to an end: At last the war has ceased.
3.
Obsolete. to pass away; die out.
–verb (used with object)
4.
to put a stop or end to; discontinue: He begged them to cease their quarreling.
–noun
5.
cessation: The noise of the drilling went on for hours without cease.
The way you are using it, you need to use cease. Also, one of your sentences your verb and your object didn't agree. We were once ally is incorrect, in this context you have to us the plural of ally. We were once allies is correct or, alternately, you could say you were once our ally.

Chi (Chapter 3) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

cute, adorable, ect.fluffy.i have no idea why i like this story but i do


Hesunohana (Chapter 2) - Fri 26 Mar 2010

so funny !! Kagome speaking to Tenseiga !


Chi (Chapter 2) - Fri 19 Mar 2010

so far i am enjoying it. please continue writing


mercedes elizabeth (Chapter 2) - Sat 13 Mar 2010

awesome


mercedes elizabeth (Chapter 1) - Mon 08 Mar 2010

please tell me that's not it. what happens now. come on, if there's more to the story, update it soon


sweetest angel (Chapter 1) - Sun 07 Mar 2010

wow Amazing begining! I really can't wait to read more of your story!

please, update as soon as you can!


chika1345 (Chapter 1) - Sun 07 Mar 2010

Thats one hell of a sword. She buys an old rusty sword and it brings her a man! I want a sword like that! Lol can't wait to see what happens


perphila (Chapter 1) - Sun 07 Mar 2010

Poor gramps...sad to say I still laughed. I wonder what Sesshomaru will think of her room? lol


miki (Chapter 1) - Sun 07 Mar 2010

I would like to see how it will works but as far it goes it really well written


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