trying not to sound completely retarded bbbuuuuuttttt

HOLY COW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is freakin awesome its a good read on of the best ive read cant wait for an update and and i have theories!! lol i love the imagery that you've put into this as well as the.... life? i think is the word im lookin for were you can see this almost happening it has a depth to it cant wait to read the next chapter  mega kudos

Dude...youre so messed up and gory in this story......I LIKE IT!!!!!!!! my heart is racing and I felt like I was watching a horror movie lol......Did the movie Jeepers Creepers inspire you in any way??

It was beautiful! I love how detailed your story was! =) Good Job! Keep it up! =D