ack. O.o How can a story this good with over 3000 reads only have one review??? I personally loved it. It was very creative and different in a good way. It's nice to read a story that isn't predictable. I especially liked that Kagome was turned in to a Fate. I have never read any story that did that before. Great job. ^_^
I liked the scenario you set up here so far. First having Kikyo and Inuyasha get together, but in a way that didn't make either of them the villan was a nice move.
Secondly telling the story more from Kagome's point of view was also nice to see. Revealing her feelings about Inuyasha and Kikyo. I'm happy that she and Kikyo weren't enemies but confidants, and that it was Inuyasha she had issues with.
Then I read chapter 2 and I was also pleased to see what happened. Kagome's transformation also made sense, and making her a fate instead of a female dog demon was something that I hadn't expected.
I look forward to the next chapter.
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