I really liked this more primal view, though I'm not often a fan of the 'Kagome something other than a Miko by birth' thing. I particularly loved Shippou's part. He's often overlooked which both saddens and upsets me. That Kilala also had her part was a bonus, for she's often glossed over even more than Shippou.
Thanks so much for writing!
no not a one shot!
*cries*
pwease make it into a story?
*puppy eyes*
...um (Chapter 1) - Mon 02 Aug 2010
great... i love the whole knotting thing, tooo
I give this an A+
stars (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Apr 2010
when are you updataing, please updata
Very good, i can't wait to see what happens when inuyasha wakes up. please update
cant wait for the next chappie
what a great story loved reading I hope u think of making more then just a one shot.
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