Eeek! My phone didn't display the review box properly hence the empty review before this. And I don't know how to remove that. Sorry.
Most importantly, I can't believe Sesshoumaru dies!!! Most of the time it's Kagome who dies because she's human, but a strong and invincible demon like Sesshoumaru? I couldn't imagine it. It was such a sad story and you wrote it so beautifully I could feel Kagome's pain. I also liked the way Sesshoumaru's love for Rin wasn't downplayed even with Kagome and Sesshoumaru as the main characters. You managed to entwine both love stories splendidly... I was hoping Sesshoumaru will reincarnate or something at the end of the story so that Kagome could have her happy ending, but you stuck with the angst and pain and I was really overwhelmed at Kagome finding Sesshoumaru's grave.
Thanks for the lovely story! =)
You made me cry you bitch!! jk i love you and this story so much!!
ha! i just read this on spark and left you a wall tag saying i couldnt review then i saw you had it on dokuga, omfg so sad. seriously TT3TT i'm in tears, like big ungly swelly face tears. -nods-
I...can't...stop...crying! What a bitter sweet, beautiful yet so heartbreakingly sad tale. And so well-written. I'm glad the gory parts weren't overly gross.
*Sniffles* Such a sad story... at least they admitted someting even if it was on Sesshoumaru's death bed. I couldn't help but feel my eyes water up a few times there. I'm happy Sessh found peace and got to stay with Rin. I kinda wish Kagome and Sesshoumaru would have met up somewhere. Oh well at least she expected it in the end. *Smiles sadly*
Tanima (Chapter 1) - Thu 24 Jun 2010
It was absolutely marvelous and breath taking! ---i'm crying even now! Thank you so much for this piece of marvel!
Incredilbly beautiful and believeable, and yet so so sad. Kagome's last thoughts however, soothed it all into something bittersweet.
ohmigad! That was so heartbreakingly beautiful, I'm crying! You did a wonderful job on this and I'm so glad r0o suggested it.
Bailey (Chapter 1) - Mon 22 Mar 2010
You had me crying rivers with this story. It was so beautifuly written and wonderfuly heart wrenching.
Waaaaaaa! So sad, and so beautiful. Great writing!
This was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo heart breaking. I like almost couldn't stop crying. It was very beautifully written. I love it.
Kagura (Chapter 1) - Sun 28 Feb 2010
I loved this story!! So beautifully written yet so sad...I have to admit I cried a good while after reading it
*sobs uncontrollably* that was......a masterpiece. so sad, but so SO beautiful. :*)
This is soooo sad! It was written wonderfully, but I just kept hoping for some kind of happy ending. While it was tragically beautiful, it tugged on my heartstrings in a most bittersweet way. Good job. I hope to read more from you. Hopefully it will be in a happier tone!
Oh, I absolutely love this story! It is my favorite one from A Single Spark, and it make me cry every time I read it. I always recommend it when someone is looking for a fic that will give them a good cry. The emotions are so well written that the imagery they conjure is unforgetable. In case you can't tell, I am one of your #1 Fangirls and am so glad to see you here on Dokuga!
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