i can see it now right when she says his name sesshoumaru a guy pops out from behind kagome and automatic sesshoumaru asumes kagome moved on and is with this new guy so he leaves back through the well not knowing that said male is her brother or friend or something. so while hes back in the past hes hurt angry and wants to kill something right now but he later realized hes hurt her too and decides for the next 500 years until he sees her again he plans to do everything in his power to win her back since he alwayz gets what he wants. it was just a thought. please post more love this story thank you.

Gods, don´t tell me you´re going to bring them back together? No matter what he does now he doesn´t deserve a second chance with her. I don´t understand why so many females endure all the humilation and then go back to their cheating males. He can´t undo all the cheating and she should just live with that? What bullshit, I can´t stand women with no backbone or self-respect.

Well I feel aorry for Kagome...I hope she refuses him and he has to wait 500 years!

i really like this story so far! i hope she'll accept when he apologizes.. with a lot of groveling of course haha. can't wait to read the next chapter!

so glad you updated this!!! but i so thought that he would wait untill it was her time to find her instead of going through the well.

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!! I really Wish You would continue :) but only if you want to i swear I almost cried :) Loved it :) keep writing you do wonderful work :)

go kagome !!! love the story

To be honest...you have a great intro to a story. I understand this was a one-shot, but it could easily be adapted. Of course he would have to work for it for sure, but I hope you continue it.

Please dont leave it there I think it could become a wonderfl chapter story.