goo chapter! sad for kagome though, its interesting! i love thats she's a fox demon we dont get to see near enough of foxy miko! :3
Ello Kat-chan1, r0o saw your story and thought she'd read it, i see there arent any reviews :\ maaaaa I'm sorry! but i'm planing on changing that!
so far i like this but i can say there are only a few thinsg that might need help so far. minor things, like spelling and description, but i'm not perfect and i dont think anyone is, so no worries there. My goal is to review your fic, and help you as an author.
I think song fics get a bad rep b/c of the fact that most people have the characters singing, and thats very out of character for them unless they are drunk. That being said, not that i dont like it b/c i think that's one reason for the lack of reviews.
I also think you need to work on your summary, anything would be better then just " based off this album" that gives us no idea how your story is going to work or what kinda fic it is. That being said, try something simple and along the lines of
"Sick of Inuyasha's attitude kagome expresses herself through great change by singing." song-fic via "album name"
the only reason i say this is b/c i know a lot people rarely read the song that's listed b/c they either already know it, or dont want to take the time. anyway so far its good, and i'll see you on the next review!