This is a good chapter and I was happy to see Kagome escapte his teasing, even if only for a bit. And it's about time he start doing a little thinking on his situation! However, I have the distinct feeling that you were racing to get this done and posted before you went to bed. I found a number of things that you need to look at:

[An] Any/And [?] interference with Kagome’s torment, Bankotsu was spoiling [Kagome’s] fun.  (Don't you mean Sesshoumaru's fun?)

Bankotsu reprimanded, correctly [interoperating] interpreting the cunning light

the [bartender], a male  (Bartender is one word)

a place where none of his upper-class friends would ever find him, it also served good sake.

Perhaps, she’d been avoiding his teasing[ly]

[Accept] Except, of course, for those times you use me in a scheme to torment her?”

“And [that’s] that had better not be the case because, first, [that’s] that would mean we’ve fallen into a parallel universe

less right. Now, I’m trying to relax

Me thinks he doth protest too much....

>_> one of these days she's going to pounce that puppy and he's not going to know what hit him >:3

hahah! I love your fic. The last chapter with Rin was sweet, and the next chapter with “Leaving your balcony door open like that is an invitation to get robbed!” was great. and well it's all all around funny. can't wait till your next chapter.

AHAHAHHA~! "Yeah, but that ass deserves a metal." hahahh *cries* Great job Amiee-chan. I'm not usually into alternatives but this fic has win all over it. XD

awe!!!!! *loves it!* i wonder when kagome will figure out that she loves him or when Sess figures out she's more then just a conquest ^_^

ooooooooooo he's starting to figure it out!!!! =x Kagome and Sessho kissing in a tree

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I FREAKING LOVE YOU! thats awesome =x someone needs to buy that puppy a book how to mate your oblivous human.

And I hope everyone in the bar saw her toss it in his face! That's only a small payback for all he's done to her!!!

I love this little story of yours! It always leaves me guessing how the characters will act to a situation, and of course I look forward to the future interations between them :)

tease! gah i want more!!! *whines* SHOE! can she throw a shoe at him?

HAH that last image is SO CUTE! he and a CHILD are having a contest! (even if that child is rin it's still really funny!) 

COOL STORY!

I love this twist. Not even a taiyoukai can resist Rin.

0o0o0o0o0o0o i really like this! Mee is Kagome's Sister?

This would make a wonderful, full-chapter fanfic.  I like the ideas behind it, and where it seems to be going.  Good job!

lmaoooo xD I love your story -- please continue updating =]

XDDD!!!

Update soon plz ^^

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@_@ you always make me want more... *wiggles bribery c0okie at you*

Hahahahahahaha!!!!!!!! I would never wear a dress like that at a wedding. Please update soon.