lol, nice banter, oh and how did one date turn into dating?
this chapter made me giggle.
i like that he is pretty fail-tastic at something.
she's so ready to snap back at him that she doesn't question the fact that he was just so conviently at the place she was having her pity date? XP
can't wait for the next update, I really like this story
Ah. The fluffster knows her better than she knows herself. LOL. Accidental spying indeed. LOl
Oh, poo, Sessho picking again, naughty puppy!! Just doesn't know when to stop!!
wuh oh, that doesn't sound good... and she should know better! Hiten is not the one for her!!!! Great job!
Do you knwo the muffin man? The muffin man? The muffin man. Yes, I know the muffin man. W-who lives on Drewery Lane? Well, she's seeing the muffin man. The muffin man? THE MUFFIN MAN! So she's seeing the muffin man...
=x
well...at least until her protective puppy found out and warder her apartment so she COULDNT see him =x
OOH Sessho is being a bad puppy. I love these. More than any other drabble set.
Cute. I like this chapter. Well done. I only noticed one thing and that was you used the word bate instead of bait. Great job though. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^
Sesshoumaru is such a BABY!!!! LOL! This is sooo good! I look forward to the next chapter.
wuh oh, Sessho's in for it as soon as she realizes what she did. I can't wait to see how that pans out! Great job!
Not Important (Chapter 37) - Sun 05 Sep 2010
Oooooh Sesshomaru get your A-game on! And puhleeeeze Kags is so not a toy to you.
Here's an update for you Sess: Denial is not just a river in Egypt. Honestly. Get your head out of the dirt.
I don't know... Cake or Sessh? Cake... or Sessh? Caaaake... or....... Caaaaaaaaaaake...
*Shakes Head*
Shesshoumaru, of course! Wait, is that carmel cake with chocolate buttercream frosting and carmel filling? Ummmm, caaaake...
Hey! Can I have my cake ON Sesshoumaru????
Oops! This review is rated M!
Thank you, Aimee, for the wonderful birthday present; and it wasn't late, I celebrate my birthday the whole month of September and even into December! I really love this chapter! A cake chapter is perfect for me!
Rowdy
so arrogent!
is of no importnce (Chapter 36) - Tue 31 Aug 2010
Ruh ro Raggy!
Omg I love this fic like there's no tomorrow.
JUST saying.
But, of course, Sesshoumaru doesn't love her! *gigglesnort* HA! How he LIES to himself!!!! You make me laugh so much with this story, Aimee! It is choice!
There are just a couple of things in this chapter that I wanted to point out:
Hiten entranced the female patrons inoperably.
Inoperably - Incapable of being implemented or operated; unworkable
I think that competently, facilely, effortlessly, smoothly, adroitly, or easily would be better used in that sentence; assuming that you mean that he entranced them with ease.
Such charm, chivalry and caring were [faucets] facets of Sesshoumaru’s personality
Yohko (Chapter 36) - Tue 31 Aug 2010
NICE!!! A confrontation would be nice. Lol. :D
lmao =x p0o0o0or p0o0o0o0o0o0or thunder demon. He's gunna die =x all cause he decided to sniff at the wrong onna. I loves it!
I'm rooting for Hiten. Sesshomaru needs a little competition!! Muhahaha!! Cannot wait to see how he ruins this for poor Kago. Love this!!
jojo661538 (Chapter 35) - Fri 13 Aug 2010
so im guessing aunt bea was it sent hiten to do i dont know what hm a jelouse sesshoumaru is very funny hehehe anyways keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^
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