I read this story years ago on fanfiction, I did not know it was on this site. I'm glad I know so I can add it as my favorite, this story is awesome, I hope you finish this story, keep it coming. Happy New Year!
oh More more more more I can't wait to see what the pups turn out to be...I also forgot..I'm not sure if you told us once in the story or not but,what was Kagome's Dad...he obviously wasn't human was he?? & what about her Mom & her brother? Is Kagome the only one that was born to be an immortal & does she have Miko powers along with all her demon abilities...or yes she does right ...the sword that was made for her was made for the Shikon Miko but she isn't just a Miko ...she was a being made by the Kami's & Sessh is her soul mate.I can't wait to see what the pups are going to look like in the morning. I also can't wait for Sessh & Kagome to get more time to spend being intimate..I mean they just get Mated for Life & they don't even get a few days to spend together getting to know each other intimately,that just doesn't seem right or fair. They deserve to spend some intimate time together getting to know each other's bodies,likes,dislkes ,wants & finding each others sensitive spaces.Without spending that intimate time together,especially in a relationship where the 2 beings that have just been mated are to be mated for life & are immortal, is only going to cause problems with insecurity & distrust..that's why spending time together alone & getting familiar with each other is so important...it just seems as if you are blowing past that...I know they have a lot to take care of but still...I mean think about it,Kagome was a virgin before this & you have it where she had her 1st sexual experience & it was great....& as soon as it was over she was like ,I could go for a second round & he was worried about if he hurt her & had her take a bath & other than when she bit him,she hasn't had any want or overwhelming desire to be alone & intimate with him....isn't that odd. Most beings in love & after having their 1st intimate experience with the one they love...crave intimacy for a while at least at 1st....Kagome's lack of need,want or desire for intimacy with Sessh seems odd,especially knowing that they'll soon have a house full & then have to confront Naraku. Of course I could be jumping the gun & in the next chapter Kagome is going to drag Sessh into their bedroom & try to spend as much intimate time with him till their guests start to arrive & such.
I look forward to the next chapter
Rodneya (Chapter 17) - Sat 21 May 2011
ok i started reading this late last night and i fell asleep, so i picked up at chapter 4 or 5 nd kept reading throughout the day, in between chores. so i'm reading nd reading nd i scroll to the end of chapter 17, nd i'm like, "hey!? what happened to the chapters?!" nd i panicked and yelled, "I'M ALL OUT OF CHAPTERS!!! WHAT AM I SUPOSSED TO DO NOW!?!?!?"
Please update soon. I cant wait to see what happens next. Thanks
lara (Chapter 16) - Wed 23 Mar 2011
I love this story & I can't wait for more I"m dying for the next chp
MORE,MORE, MORE, MORE,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
lara (Chapter 14) - Wed 23 Mar 2011
so far so good this is great I can't wait for the next ch
lara (Chapter 15) - Fri 11 Mar 2011
I just love this story I reread it again. I wanted to check to see if I had already left a review & I did. I'm sorry I left a big long babbling review on different ways Inu & Kikyo should be punished & tortured..I wish I could see what time I left the review it was probably at some ungodly hour or after staying awake for a day or 2. I really do apologize for my long,babbling, ridiculus review.
I love this story & can't wait to read more & see what will happen next.
I'm excited to find out what Kagome will look like when they are done mating since her ancestors said (her looks prior to her & Sessh mating were similar to Kikyo only so once she was pulled thru the well her journey could begin the way it needed with to) that once she & Sessh,her soul mate, finish mating it will unlock her true form(& her powers & abilities)& allow her features to change.....I'm dying to know. Will her hair will get longer & silkier or change color?? Will her eyes change color or shape?? Will her ears be like Sessh's?? Will she have markings on her body,her wrists,arms,legs,waist, back??? After they started the process before they mated at all she got blue stripes on each cheek & a blue tear drop & Sessh got a pink tear drop on his forehead with his blue crescent moon.Will she also get his crescent moon on her forehead to show they are mated like he got the tear drop??? Will she get fangs??? I kinda hope she'll get claws,a tail & fangs (so she can give Sessh a mating mark & take in his blood & his essence).That would be cool if she could be like a Miko/Inu-Tai youkai/shape shifting tenshi...that would give her Miko & an image & likeness from Sessh's blood youkai & essence from drinking his blood mixture with hers & a shapeshifting/tenshi from the unlocking her Kami given immortality & powers & abilities...does that sound crazy???
I love this story & I can't wait to read more............I'm dying for the next chapter
thank you for writing & sharing a great story
lara (Chapter 15) - Thu 24 Feb 2011
that was cool I had no idea what to expect so I couldn't be dissappointed but I can't help but wonder what type of being Kagome was before or is now ? Since Sessh is/was & has always been her soul mate..............I can't help but wonder why when as soon as he was aware she was being hurt & he knew he loved her & already Kagome was be physically beaten & threatened unless even when he said he'd become aware of it 2 moons ago,could it have been that they were not being treated well but was unaware that she was being physically brutalized & that Sessh was threatening her life,the life of her family, her son & the pack...along with the fact that Inutasha didn't hide the fact & constantly told her often & openly that she was worthless & since she was unwilling to kill herself or give up her life & give her soul to Kikyo willingly then he told her if you so determined to keep Kikyo's soul then he & Kikyo would just use her to do all the work of finding the shards along with telling her that as soon as the Jewel was complete he & Kikyo were would be killing her to take Kikyo's soul back from Kagome so Kagome would just die already & Kikyo could have her life back..............I really want Sessh,Kagome & the pack ..especially Kagome personally to beat the living shit out of Inuyasha while Kikyo was held back by the rest & then with Inuyasha beaten & useless on the ground,unable to protect Kikyo ..I would love to hear Sessh,Kagome,the pack & Midoriko & the souls either together or seperately to tell Inuyasha & Kikyo aloud in front of all them that not only is Kagome not Kikyo's reincarnation but she is a being created by the Kami's...& if Inuyasha & Kikyo would have either tried to or killed Kagome which is unlikely since Kagome was born an immortal being & was never a being as lowly as Kikyo...so if they tried to kill Kagome they'd have failed & if they had succeded in inurying Kagome enough for her to look,sound & appear dead leaving Inuyasha & kikyo to think she was dead ...they'd be waiting forever for Kikyo to become one of the living as Kagome is not & never was Kikyo's reincarnation....& the fact that that Kikyo came back & willing stayed undead living off the souls of innocent that the fact she chose to stay undead made her an evil being,by living off innocent souls her undead soul/reanimated body of clay became more damned & evil, when you add in the fact that no matter what she told Inuyasha..as soon as Kikyo came from the dead to the undead she knew Kagome never was her reincarnation but seeing the power Kagome held & how pure her soul was Kikyo was so consumed with taking Kagome's soul thinking she'd become alive again & be as powerful as Kagome...when the fact was that when Kikyo was alive she didn't hold 1/50 of the power that Kagome had.Kagome is a pure ,immortal being of the Kamis & in Kikyo's greed for all the evil that she's done since she decided to stay on the mortal plane...especially repeatedly trying to kill Kagome, a being of the Kami's, Kikyo now has to pay her dues for being an evil being who was obsessed with murder & power.....she will never know life,peace or heaven...she had a choice when she was brought back by the evil witch & her choice then along with everything she's done since then only means she will be spending an eternity paying for her sins with suffering, Kikyo made this choice on her own & nobody can save her now...Kikyo's soul is now owned by hell & she will remain there........then when it comes to Inuyasha when he does die...he to will spend along time in hell paying for the torture of a pure being made the Kami's...only Inuyasha knows why he chose this path as he was well aware he was doing wrong & just didn't care...he may not have known that Kikyo was lying to him...but he knew right from wrong....when he knew Kikyo in life he may have had a crush on her but she told him she would only consider having something to do with him after he became human.....so at some level he knew Kikyo never loved him for him or accepted him for himself....the fact he was aware that Kagome was the only person that never judged him,cared for him,treated him with kindness & he not only never thanked her for anything but he also verbally abused her & when he did decide to torture his only true friend in the hopes she would commit suicide..&the times he physically abused her..he enjoyed it so he too will be punished for his crimes ......he will live as his lifetime isn't over yet but he can choose to make things worse or better by his behavior........until the time of his death.........but he needs to know that if & when he goes to hell...he'll never see Kikyo there....part of his punishment is that whether he commits suicide & tries to kill millions with him in an attempt to find kikyo in hell...he never will...one of the main parts in repaying his debt for the pain & suffering he's caused is he will never be reunited with Kikyo in death,in hell or in a reincarnated life if he has one..
As of now the only way he will ever know any type of peace,happiness or love of another is by trying to pay off his life deaths by making it up to those that are alive that he's harmed...only Inuyasha knows why he chose this path but he did & his only chance at a 2nd chance is by spending the rest of his life becoming a better person & trying to heal the damage he caused----that was just one of the ideas I thought of
I can't wait to see more of what goes on between Sessh & Kagome or what Kagomes new forms are, what her family & pups decide regarding the gift she can give them....& then in 100 yrs or so she will fight a new evil...will she have time to train & to start a family with Sessh...I would love to see her & Sessh have pups...I could picture a set of male pur Inu pup twins one with Sessh's long silver hair & Kagome's blue eyes & one with Kagome's long dark hair & sessh's amber eyes------I'm also dying to know if when Kagome wakes you only told us of her markings but I hope her hair is now as long as Sessh's & she's got body stripes also...but we gotta wait for the next chapter
Dragoness (Chapter 15) - Wed 23 Feb 2011
Your right the chapter was not as good as I expected it was better. You are doing such a good job with this especially for your first story. You need to give yourself a pat on the back. (^_^)
Love the story great plot and all though one thing has been bugging me. On Chapter 10 Sesshomaru gave Kagome her courting mark and bathed with her. Why did he not see the scar then? It was that one thing that had me puzzled until now. I wonder when Inuyasha and Kikyo will show up again? This story is too cool.... update soon.
lara (Chapter 14) - Thu 17 Feb 2011
how cruel of you ...you said there will be a lemon in the next chapter & that was said 3 chapters ago....I only found this story today & read the intire thing I really enjoyed it & I hope you haven't forgotten the story or decided not to continue it. I really enjoyed what I read so far & I can't wait to see what comes next & how the story will work out so I really hope you continue this story & soon.
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
amy (Chapter 14) - Sat 15 Jan 2011
DON'T YOU DARE NOT FINISH THIS! I LOVE IT!
I'm already looking forward to Kagome and Sesshomaru's mating. I usually root for Inuyasha in fics, but this is one of the few times where I hope he and Kikyou get their just rewards. Yeah, he's a beta, but he sucks as one, trying to kill Kagome just so that Kikyou gets her soul, even though they're not incarnation and reincarnation. Kikyou's time has come and gone and that iidiot just doesn't get it. May they both suffer eternal punishment for doing what they're doing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Chi (Chapter 11) - Sat 03 Apr 2010
omg i love the new chapter.i'm so glad that this story was continued.i know this sounds cliche`(ANNOYING) but plase uodate soon.
DancingFlower (Chapter 11) - Sat 03 Apr 2010
ugh! u left a huge cliffhanger! wat does he have?! keep up the good work! :)
DancingFlower (Chapter 11) - Sat 03 Apr 2010
ugh! u left a huge cliffhanger! wat does he have?! keep up the good work! :)
Great chapter loved everything! A jealous Sesshoumaru make me happy!! Please update soon!
I am really enjoying this story. Please continue writing. I want to know what happens next. Love Sesshoumaru in this one. Well, love Sesshoumaru..period. But, you get what I'm saying. LOL
HEHE I loved it wonderful job really! I ALSO love the Sesshomaru's answer to Kagome's question about why they did THAT lol hahahaha hilarious i absolutely loved it you must continue soon please!
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