Anglo-sama!! Ducky here!! ^__^ The first thing I want to say is: Awwwwww…. That was so adorable!! *squee* I thought it was so sweet of Sesshoumaru to get the piano back for her. The overall plotline was great – the oneshot was short and sweet.
There were some grammar/spelling issues…blah blah blah; but no one can escape them… ^.~ The mistakes didn’t necessarily take away from the enjoyment of the fic. I do recommend staying in one tense though.
It was a lovely fic and I’m sorry to have reviewed so late!! Gomen gomen!!
ducky out!
Kaysan (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Feb 2010
It's pretty good. I thought the idea of using a sentimental gift, that was related to her past, is a pretty good idea and quite thoughtful. It's so sweet. Nice story and keep writing you've got a new fan now.
Briliant. Though i think the visual of Jaken in a tutu has scarred me for life... ;)
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