You really have a tallent for stories and think you should write more and enter moer contest because they are so amazing. So keep up the good work in your stories, they truley are awsome beyound anything I've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I absolutely loved the story. Gosh, you are a very talented writer, and the way you describe things makes it feel very vibrant and reel. I'm here banging my head against the screen, trying to figure out why doesn't isn't more stories by you! You need to get working on that lol! You have a lot of depth and feelings included in your words, and it completely sucks you right in. I also liked that it wasn't all lovey-dobey, you had a storyline of sadness and sentiments creeping in there, and it just added a perfect touch!
Congrats, it was fantastic! You had me hooked from the first words!
Bravo!! I love it!
very deep and sexual story indeed. I love how you show the nasty side of a relationship and how it could easily be fix with only showing your soul mate how much you love them <33
Approve please take the banner :D
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