hi, i've read your story for forever my lord, for eternity my love till chapter 10. what captured my attention was the first scene. what circumstance drove kagome to become seshoumaru's whatever she is. however, when i reached the part about him killing their child, i was surprised that kagome still wanted to see him. i think it was rather rushed. it still seemed rushed even after that. their shouting just seem to fit y'know? no chapter on their thoughts, no musings, regrets. something that'll give us a clue. there's so much drama here, i wish it was more drawn out. why would seshoumaru treat her this way? why is kagome so weak? it's difficult to make it believable if we readers missed out on something. maybe if there was more hints, implications, between-the-lines 'something' to justify their actions.
sshoumaru is being a bastard, but what's his reason for it? did kagome cheat? does he think kagome cheated? no hints were given, but a reader searches for reasons to his behavior. and kagome too.
| OMFG THAT WAS SOOOOOO AMAZING...YOU ARE SUCH A GOOOOOOOOOD READER!!! THIS STORY HAD ME IN TEARS!!! I HOPE YOU MAKE A SEQUEL!!!! I AM YOU NUMBER 1 FAN!!!
malom (Chapter 22) - Fri 29 May 2009
Well written? Definitely. But I really have to get this off my chest. This is the most disturbing piece of sesskag fanfiction I have ever encountered. I just pray that no unsuspecting female with a history or current experience with abuse read and use this to justify their fate. As the critical realist, Georg Lukacs, in his denouncement of Nietszche's love of aphorisms once remarked, all writers are responsible for how their words are interpreted.
Anamika (Chapter 22) - Tue 25 Nov 2008
| WEll in between I thought about leaving it. I mean that beating her just because he's a lord and because of his ego. It was horrible. One thing that I really like here in the ending. It really good. Your style of writing, The choice of words, the time frame, the description of the ongoing events was really wonderful.
tzusuko (Chapter 1) - Sun 10 Aug 2008
| I love your story, it shows potential for a great deep tale. BUT, with 12 chapters going on, I'm still confused as to what event/past has led to Sesshoumaru acting bi-polar, because being lord seems to be a pretty weak excuse for constant beating/loving. Your story is very detailed and is well written, but I hope that by this point, you'll have a lengthy chapter to explain his actions because it seems that if the chapters are going to continue like this, then there isn't much of a plot other then the continual dominating relationship of abuse and contradicting actions.
BUT! still a great story.
Jess (Chapter 12) - Sat 09 Aug 2008
| I'm MLMonty...Kagome is like some poor little dog who is constantly abused by its master, the dog know its going to kicked again and keeps returning for more. I mean she really has to be pretty desperate for love to keep wanting him, to keep wanting that. Look at all he's done, he betrayed her, lied to her, turned her into pet/sex slave, he leashed her like a dog, he constantly abuses her physically, has her whipped while he watches, he raped her, he says the worst things to her, he killed her child, etc. From what I gather these things (all of which are unforgivable even to the most forgiving people), maybe except for the baby killin, are all pretty regular events in her life with. I know he's a lord and all but really!? I keep thinking well maybe its some kind of ruse but even a ruse won't get him out of this in my book. I really don't want this to be a happy ending.
I do have some questions that I hope your story will answer in the near future. What is Kagome's background? Where did she come from? How did they meet? Does she have any family? What brought about Sesshoumaru's change? And if Sesshoumaru's a demon, does Kagome have any of her miko powers in this?
Jess (Chapter 12) - Sat 09 Aug 2008
| Oh I meant to say "I'm with MLMonty." I also meant to say that throughout the story Tansho seemed like she was trying to reason with Kagome about his behavior or something, that really irked me.
MLMonty (Chapter 10) - Mon 04 Aug 2008
| I'm surprised you haven't had her try to commit suicide yet. Normally I don't read the type of fic where the main character is abused/cheated on and STAYS with the guy but you managed to reel me in.
kagsess (Chapter 10) - Sun 22 Jun 2008
| I think Sess is bi-polar, but I do love this fic. If u have an update mailing list please add me.
| wow....she'll kill him if he gets her knocked up and then sends her away.
Alexis (Chapter 9) - Sun 15 Jun 2008
| Please update
| Just what is going on with him? What the h3ll does he expect? He's the one who should be begging for HER forgiveness, not the other way around! I like your writing and your other stories so I will stick this out.....I have seen your little twists so I have faith! But Sheesh! She asks an honest question and he throws a massive tantrum! What a baby! But I still like the story! ;-)
| wow sess is in deep ***** i really hope he changes a bit i mean killing his pup is an offense that should not forgotten. Kags really needs to think and make him understand he not the whole world. Update plzzz
Jessica (Chapter 8) - Tue 10 Jun 2008
| Ooooh, I don't trust Sesshoumaru. I hope Kagome is keeping her wits about her. He's a sneaky manipulative one. I so don't want her with him......
Nobody (Chapter 8) - Tue 10 Jun 2008
| hmm what is going on? im so excited.
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