Wow. I'm sorry, but Kagome is kinda uber-creepy in this story. That's stalkerish behaviour right there. I mean, a bit of his hair, a scrap of his clothes, and a piece of his fingernail? Next thing you know, she'll be offering to bandage a wound for him just to have a bit of his blood or something. Aside from the fact that Sesshoumaru almost never get's hurt. But still, CREEPY....
Yeah, nice touch. Thats sort of seductive...ah, I like Sesshomaru :)
I loved it u must update again soon please
This was very good!I like it!
LOL That was so cute! Rin was great. And now, she made the final push and the human, girl, and miko, is now Kagome. Sweet. ^_^ I like the way you did that. It really works. ^_^