Also, I agree completely with Miss K's review. Just sayin. :p
Wiccan...Why was this never finished? HMMMMM?!? You do realize, now that I have seen this I am more than likely going to go through your gallery and and pester you for anything that is incomplete. This one, I know will be. So I am going to go pester Zandi next time she comes into chat. But just saying. More than likely, you will need to be prepared for review bombs. -nods knowingly- <3
(Chapter 1) - Fri 31 Dec 2010
hehe this is quite funny and Kagome is so blunt in it too, YAY! thanks for the story
This drabble is the reason you should write more. You could sooo turn this into a good story. Drabbles are kind of like stripteases sometimes. You want more, but it's not happening, no matter how much you want.
(Chapter 1) - Sun 05 Jul 2009
|Ah, that last line was AWESOME. Gah, you did this so well! I'm horrible at drabbles, but you make it look effortless. Great job. I hope you are planning to write more little insights into the lives of Kagome and Sesshoumaru. You're too good to stop now!
(Chapter 1) - Fri 08 May 2009
|That was awesome, Wiccan. Your friends SHOULD encourage you to keep writing Sess/Kag.
Your second attempt at Sess/Kag? So much accomplished in so few words. You really should write more! ^^
I can't remember if I commented on this way back on ES...anyway, I'm commenting now. I loved it! I quite enjoy his realization that perhaps he can be seen through too.
and your writing is beautiful
I still think you should write more. I stand by that wholeheartedly! Just what are his innermost thoughts and desires?? *waggles eyebrows*
(Chapter 1) - Thu 19 Feb 2009
|Master of tease, Ms. I Can't Write. I loved this woman, and you need to put words to paper (or posted to the internet) more often. Hope all is well. :D
(Chapter 1) - Thu 08 Jan 2009
Please tell me there will be a little sequel? Please!?!?! I very much loved this drabble the moment I read the first paragraph, very detailed in a more subtle way. ^.^
(Chapter 1) - Tue 02 Sep 2008
|After reading your story my brain went on a little vacation on what could happen after this. I love stories that do that!!!
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Sun 31 Aug 2008
|ok wonderful. You do so well with so few words. Nice and interesting. Great job
|Vermillion is the new red!
It was....sensual, in a totally psychological, oraclular way. I could almost [i]see[/i] the sex.
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Fri 22 Aug 2008
|You just left this here?! OMG! This is well written, and I am dying for good stories. Can you be enticed to write further on this? I can be very convincing...