no problem, i wanted to make sure it didnt match up too much. it is possible for two different stories to sound identical if people have the same writing style, and well their are only so many ways to write and words to use. lol thank you i am glad you like it. my sister in law started reading it on here and flipped out calling me , she read the original when i first did it, i told her it was me, and she was like ok, thats a relief. well i will have a new chapter this weekend, i hope, the girl scout campout was cancelled cause the campground is closed due to flooding. so i have more time now. its a little time consuming because i have to change all the names and as i write and read i find things to change, things that either i think sound better, or i forgot to add when i retyped it. so again thanks for the review and the link, i did find other stories on there i liked, though. im always up for a good story site.

thank you so much for checking the story out by the way i like yours a lot better anyway

i found it, it does sound like it in the first chapter but after that it is not really like that,  like i said i based it on the johanna lindsey novels, and combined different ideas from different things. Also that story is all sex pretty much, and well they are far from going that far, he is going to have work for her. so i am not too worried about it anymore.  That story was written two years ago, and i had the majority of mine over 10 yrs ago,  some of the things in it are very popular ideas, like the vows, i actually got the idea from the carpathian novels i liked the formal sounding vows, and well it not being a reconizied mating without people witnessing is from our own versions of marriage, because a marriage isnt legal if not witnessed.in lindsey's novels it was just the one pricess hidden but i like the idea of all of the women, makes a better plot i think.

  thanks for the link though, it was a good story , just a little too much sex in it lol then again its on a erotica site, i like lemons and sex but i like a story to lead up to it lol.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=351150

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Grabbing the bell he rang for... ?

what? updates more! poor kaggie! p0or sess!

stupid naraku!

I also am basing it alot on ideas from the carpathian series, the imprinting and impressing is from the dragon riders of pern, i mean really i am combining so many idea's it is confusing even to me.

No i don't read there i read erotica on kristen archives, i like the collections there. I actually got the ideas from many different placees but the main story with the queen being hid and being of nobel blood was from Johanna Lindsey's novel once a princess, and  You belong to me. I started this story like 10 years ago with it being Vampires and Werewolves, i am changing it to match the inuyasha realm i thought it would work out well. The names of the king originially was conner, and the queen was Kyrie , i based the brother and cousin on stephan's cousin and best friend  loosly in the novels.  I  also have been inspired by alot of laurell k hamilton's work as well. Can you give me the link to the story your talking about i wanna make sure i dont match that to close and it sounds good, This story is going to have at least 15 chapters or so i believe, on paper its alot more but of course typed its alot less, lol like this chapter on paper was 15 pages. lol

i dont know if u read at literotica but this sounds a lot like 'king of fae' from there

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O_O awesome =x update more!

Great chapter please update soon.Naraku just had to show his ugly head. Keep writing take care