it was short and sweet! I couldn't stop laughing at certain parts of every chapter :) well done! thanks for posting!
First, 12:20 AM not PM. 12:20 PM is afternoon, 12:20 AM on thr other hand is 20 minutes past midnight. Second, aisle not isle. Isle is an island. Aisle on the other hand is what you call the space you walk in in-between two objects. Third, edit and proofread. Finally, make Sesshomaru more in-character. Hyper talkative is not what he is.
Jenna (Chapter 4) - Sun 01 Jul 2012
Very nice.
Jenna (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 Jul 2012
"Laundry continues to sit unfinished downstairs"
Me......ONE MORE CHAPTER!
Jenna (Chapter 2) - Sun 01 Jul 2012
Oh yes Sesshy, Rin needs a role model before high school trust me. Otherwise she sees role models of all the wrong types there.
Jenna (Chapter 1) - Sun 01 Jul 2012
HAHAHHA! I would love to learn diner lingo and use to it in front of other people making them think I'm crazy when I'm just talking about food.
| I absolutely loved this. The references confused me as much as Sesshoumaru at points but overall I enjoyed them. I think my favorite point of humor was when she told him that is was okay to be compensating. Best. Conversation. I literally cackled. My only disappointment was that it wasn't longer...and that Inuyasha and Shippo weren't part of the action. And true, the characters were completely OOC, but this is an au fic! :) Loved and favorited.
Rayne (Chapter 10) - Thu 22 Mar 2012
I just loved this story! Great plot and little side couples! Though I'm still confused as to whether the Higurashi family was rich or not, since Souta DID live in a mansion with a butler-like figure...
--StaRayne
I loved your story! Everything in it, though some of the references confused me. (Meaning a lot.) xP
^::^
Tori (Chapter 10) - Wed 17 Aug 2011
This story stole my heart. It was simply adorable. I loved Kagome's personality and their relationship was very cute. However, I just feel that you wrapped things up too quickly. The ending was rather rushed. I'm glad they had a happy ending but it was just a random Marry me type thing. I feel like they didn't know each other long enough. But anyway loved it.
I absolutely love this ff. Sesshoumaru was a tad OOC, but you know what? You pulled it off beautifully. I saw his old self and a refreshing side, too that worked very well. It was so quick, but it was done in the right way. I love your style, too. It's so simple and breezy. I feel like shade everything, but you only add color to where it's needed. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.
Awwwww this was soooo cute!!!! I loved this fic and aplaud you !!!!
Gabby (Chapter 10) - Tue 26 Apr 2011
Hi, I am new to Dokuga. Your story is actually the first that I have read on this site. I loved the plot and storyline of Crash Course. It was so cute and I was easily hooked to the story. I also read the Moon and the Cherry Blossom. I also really liked that story as well. But, I have noticed that you end things abruptly. In the case of Crash Course, you built up the romance, but I thought that it was very short and it ended too soon. I would have loved to see a little bit more elaboration. But even though, I thought both of the stories were well done. You had very little gramatical errors or spelling errors, which is a pleasure to read. I also liked how you formated your work. Keep it up, and I look forward to reading more of you work in the future.
Carla! (Chapter 10) - Mon 18 Apr 2011
hmmm... I think you forgot about Inuyasha somewhere along the way... but it was a good story! =) If a bit rushed... an epilogue instead of a rushed ending would have been a bit better...
Keep up the good work!!
L-desu (Chapter 10) - Sat 22 May 2010
this story was marvelous! cute, to the point and funny. such a wonderful happy ending too. job well done!
peekbbooTan (Chapter 1) - Tue 18 May 2010
it's a really cool and funky story! I just couldn't get my eyes of the lappie while reading it!! thank's a lot for entertaining me this empty afternoon!!! :-D
A very heartfelt story. Very quick to read, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. I definitely felt the romance in there, a different kind of romance, but it was still beautiful. The ending was a bit rushed, but I understand that you might have wanted to keep the fic light. All in all, very nice!
wink (Chapter 10) - Thu 25 Mar 2010
It was cute. The whole story left me with a quirky good feeling, like seeing a rainbow on your way to work ;) For it's length I thought everything flowed. It's very well done! I'm adding it my repeat reads list. Thanks!
krazy4fluffy (Chapter 10) - Sun 14 Mar 2010
I'm sorry, but I hated the ending. It was too fast, too dry, too serious and no-fun compared to the past chapters. It was like a complete, drastic 360º flip. It felt like I was reading another story. You went from "showing" us what was going on to "telling" us, which brings the writer to bore the reader.
I felt like you wanted to finish the story quickly and that's why you wrote this ending.
Anyway, I gotta add that I love the chapters before. A lot. So I guess that might make up for the hatred I feel for the last chapter.
xoxo
Really nice story overall.
See you!
It ended perfectly, I wouldn't have it any other way.
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