That was quite the first chapter. I was kinda just browsing around but your story def catches the reader's attention and then holds it. I am really quite intriged as where the story will go next and what is behind the story. The set up was fantastic but then there is no continuation. I hope that you have not forgotten bout this and will decide to continue...letting us know what is to come. I know I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Amy (Chapter 1) - Wed 12 May 2010
keep writing .it us juicy and sweet.
Aki (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Feb 2010
update soon
This is a very intriguing fic so far. I like it very much. Dark and sexy. What more needs to be said? I look forward to see how things unfold. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
Wow I love it!! I can't wait for the next one hope its soon!!!!!
jk (Chapter 1) - Sun 31 Jan 2010
Not bad, i really like it so far, something new where shesshomaru & kagome r concerned & his reaction to her. i think u shuld giv it a shot. Good luck lookin forward to it.
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