OH OH OH
applauds!
that was so smart!
i thought it was a lemon!
and then i'm like when miroku called out i was like.
did they just have sex infront a bunch of people!
i had like re read back up!
and then i got it!
i was like WOAH!
VERY SMART!
LVOE LOVE LOVE!
Well, their skating might of been flawless, but so was your writing. It was excellent. I really enjoyed reading it. You should have more confidence in your abilities. It was definitely worthy.
Dehlia (Chapter 1) - Sat 30 Jan 2010
OMFG! ROTFLMAO!
And I really thought they were having sex! Lol!
Actually, I like how it ended. This way I can enjoy the seductiveness of the beginning without feeling guilty tomorrow. XD
Keep it up girl!
I t was so cool to have the Nationals mentioned here. You see, I live in Spokane, Wa. We ( the city) were thrilled to host them for a second time.
I love watching the skating on TV, too bad the tickets were so expensive to go see in person.
You did a great job on your story, I very much enjoyed it.
Hugs,
LadySafire
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