To say the least, I'm surprised I'm a first reviewer for you XD
I enjoyed thus far, your idea of Kagome going into her grandfather's 'magical' mirror and ending in a, presumably, further time into the past, it's intriguing, thoughtful (of course), and makes me wonder what will happen next. Your idea is original, and one of the most important things I noticed was your fluidity and transition---original. It is only the first chapter after all. Looking forward to the next.
Just to put things into persepctive, in case you happen to be one of those who might take what I say offensivley and not see the underlying message, hopefully it's not a priority the number of readers that will propel you to move forward with your imagination. I believe it does happen, such as on occasion I'd see on an author's note with some humor in the mix: 'the more reviews the quicker the next chapter ther'll be'....though I don't forget the likelihood of it just being a joke or the like, I still wonder lol. Quality beats quantity I think in most cases, especially this one. Numbers aren't necessarily a bad thing, unless it's a sense of granduer one may only be looking for and cheat the readers who appreciate nonetheless. This may sound a bit too intense, but it's just that I am simply stating that I'm among those that when they find potential and true talent in things that few may find interesting, I'd hate to see it fade away.
AND IT'S BEEN SINCE JANUARY? XD
Sorry, you could be busy with your life outside the computer or a number of things. I hope to her from you soon as any eager reader would be! XD
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