OMG!!! Can´t wait for the next chapter. This is an awesome story, I love the plot and your writing. I was checking your other work and I must confess I totally love the story called Eye for an Eye, could you please update that one too??? ;)
Anonymous (Chapter 12) - Sun 09 May 2010
this is really really really good. plz plz plz plz hurry up and update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
excellent story. i love what you have so far, please update soon
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>:l Souta!!! awe kinda sad though, but i hope this works well for them :3
THIS IS S0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o TOUCHING!! omg i LOVES it!!!!
yEy Sess didnt mass destruct! though i cant wait to see when he does, i like that Kagome's all " thanks! to the big bad scary demon :3 thats just awesome its so her!
oh wow, i think i reviewed this already but some how i missed a chapter or so and i was totally lost so i came back and i'm all O_O now, i cant wait to see what happened now, b/c i'm finally up to whre i remember!
hola (Chapter 1) - Thu 01 Apr 2010
interesting concept. i'm looking forward to reading the rest of it! :o)
beautiful chapter! so painful, made me cry. *sniff*
please update soon!
Maddie (Chapter 9) - Sat 06 Mar 2010
I love this so so so much!!!!!!!! Update soon I can't wait too see what happens!!!!!
FairQueen (Chapter 9) - Fri 05 Mar 2010
what do i think?? this is one GREAT story. i just read all 9 chapters and found i couldn't stop.the story u r weaving is just wonderful. But that evil cliffie wasn't nice :) update soon.
O_O WOW go kagome! i cant wait to see when Sesshomaru's dark side and kaggie meet :3
pauly (Chapter 9) - Thu 04 Mar 2010
I totally love this story it's so great!!!! Thanks for updating so soon. ;)
animelover24/7 (Chapter 8) - Thu 25 Feb 2010
Awesome I love it cant wait to read more update soon please ;)
Good start so far! This is a very interesting premise. I would consider getting a beta if I were you. Look forward to reading more of your work!
pauly (Chapter 8) - Tue 23 Feb 2010
Hi, I like this story very much and since I liked this one I checked other of your stories and this fanfic Eye for an eye caught my atention but it has been a while since you last updated that one and I would like to ask you to please continue writing that fanfic, the story is really good, well written and I think is original too. ;)
I definitely like the idea of Kagome being a seer and can't wait to see what sort of power she has. I look forward to learn about what sort of darkness that Sesshou has within that Miroku was forbidden to talk about. And who is Lady Yukari? What's the back story between her and Sesshou. Also, I noticed a few typos here and there in the fic so far... Romen ---> Ramen.
Keep up the good work and update soon :P
FairQueen (Chapter 3) - Fri 29 Jan 2010
great start to this story. i am enjoying your take on story. please keep up the great work. up date soon. :)
Fubuki (Chapter 3) - Thu 28 Jan 2010
I enjoyed your work immensely, and I like the storyline, it can work, but you must work on your spelling. keep a dictionary handy, and use "F7", (spell check) Once you have written your work, I reccomend you put it aside for a day, then come back and read it, correcting as you go, Then, if you are happy as to how it sound or reads post it!
stars (Chapter 3) - Thu 28 Jan 2010
please updata, that was great, please make it longer
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