That was clever, troubling and funny as all get out! You have excellent writing skills and a good ability for storytelling. There was just one little thing I noticed:
He nodded again, his [rose] nose rubbing against the fiber wood.
Ruriame (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Jan 2010
I quite liked that. I know the Sesshoumaru thing was for kicks but for some reason I really thought the Kagome comment about Kikyou at the end was hilarious.
Okaaayyyy... that was kinda...odd. Funny but odd.
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