That was bittersweet and believable.
Read the sequael to this and loved it, decided to read your other stuff.  I know you haven't updated in a while, but I thought I should let you know I love your writing style. :) 
      
swift death (Chapter 1) - Sat 17 Jul 2010 
pretty good story :) 
      
Lady_Pavarti (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Jan 2010 
I love your style of writing please continue on with this one shot. 
      
How tasteful! Please do continue it :) I like the beauty of your words. They speak a lot yet are not loud, if you get what I mean. 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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