Very cute story. Though it leaves questions unanswered, such as why Inuyasha was living in the same place as them, I like it as is. Great job :).
Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Wed 29 Sep 2010
This was a very funny little story...Poor Kags, that would be the ultimate mortifying moment. Inuyasha deserves all he gets for this little stunt, leaving a mature book like that in a toddlers room!...lol...needless to say I enjoyed this story very much, and I'll look foreward to more of your work in the future!
This was adorable and funny to read. My favorite moments were definitely when Sesshomaru and Kagome were caught and when Kagome read the story aloud realizing that what she was reading was far from a kid's book. Who knew Inuyasha could be so perverted? I would keep an eye out for grammatical errors because I did spot a few.
Very cute!!! I can see Inuyasha doing something like that so they wouldn't get on him for his choice of reading material. If he was smart knowing there was a todler in the house he would have took the cover of a sewing book. Not something I can see Kagome going over with her son. It was very well written. I can see this being a very cute set of one-shots of the different things they get into.
lol I know the feeling... I believe I have been dreaming of a story for the past couple of nights and am still typing it out lol. I like the story and I want to read more! I loved it when Kagome realized what she had been reading to shippou lol.
lol cute! Thats a hands down mortifying mom moment. I especially liked the kitchen scene, with Sesshomaru showing affection to Kagome. How many of us have walked in on our parents during a moment like that? A sweet moment, but none-the-less as a kid it makes you groan and roll your eyes! lol Then as a mom, the mortification of possibly getting caught with your hubs kissing your neck. lol Watch for a few grammatical errors, like comma usage.
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