i really like this can you keep going.

The story seems very fast paced without much info going on as to what is wrong with Kagome. She seems very flighty... perhaps it will get better. Please make sure to use spell check when you can before posting. Other than that, it seems ok.

Okay I got to the second chapter before I gave up. In the first chapter, Rin speaking in the first person is really not something a writer ought to do. It's clumsy and makes Rin look like a botard and she's anything but that. The second chapter first paragraph, the Author's Notes in the story killed it for me. Your structure is good but I couldn't read any further. Sorry.

Great story, please continue