i cried so much. very sad. but i love sad things so please write more

So i take it that was a one-shot?  There was certainly a lot of death.  I was very shocked as i read this because it jumped to kagome and sesshoumaru being in love, sesshoumaru dying, and then kagome dying.  (I'm not saying this was bad - quite the contrary.  I enjoyed this oneshot because of the hopelessness and fear associated with hurting the person you love the most).  You see, I'm a sucker for angst, and that was pretty good.  I think it would have been better if you stretched it out a bit more and made multiple chapters.  One of the best parts of the fic was the reader not knowing exactly what went on (the mystery) but it's the worst in that i really want to know what happened...

ducky out!

What a sad, tragic tale. I am wondering why she had to shoot him. It was well-written with just a few spelling mistakes. Baybe you could call it "Broken", as Kagome seems to have been broken after his death.

I really liked this one, as I am in an angsty mood lately. I wonder why he tried to kill her, but sometimes, not knowing everything is good. It is realistic. There were some small grammar and spelling issues, but nothing that a beta could not cover, if they are nit-picky enough. I know that sometimes the inspiration bug bites fast and hard, and your fingers fly along the keys, bringing something to life, and that you want to post it right away, before it is forgotten, so in light of that crazed rush, having so few errors is commendible. I hope to see more from you soon!

You're right, this was tragic.  It does leave me wondering why Kagome had to kill him.  This could have been the prologue to a very interesting chapter story.  Still, it was well written, and I liked very much.

very sad....kinda makes me wonder why she had to kill him...there were a few minor spelling issues, but nothing serious...i commend you, a job well done, you should be proud of it!!!

Very sad.  Well written.  I saw a couple of very minor spelling issues such as 'omniously' instead of 'ominously' and a couple of minor grammar issues such as 'her yet unreleased arrow' where it should have been 'her unreleased arrow.'  Aside from that, it looks really good despite the fact that it was almost heartbreaking to read due to the content.

Well done.

Very nicely done, would have prefered more explaination as to why he was trying to kill her, and story was a bit rushed, but you did a great job other than that.

Hairann