Each time she hesitates, that fear is going to get stronger. Eventually, she's going to have to take that first step. His patience will only last so long until he begins to doubt the strength of her love for him.
Aww. I hope the villager don't do someting in the future.
and whew... I just FINALLY caught up. ( had to finish the previous book)
Love it so far. I hope the guys come home soon.
Jessica (Chapter 9) - Sun 07 Mar 2010
Aw, Jaken has a soft side! thats awsomely sweet of kaggsies to be like that! can't wait to read more
TruGemini (Chapter 9) - Sun 07 Mar 2010
"Painting for me" is the title of the story. And it sucks that the village forgets how these were the same ones who protected the village and helped the villagers. Ignorance is the curse of humanity.
sugar0o (Chapter 8) - Wed 03 Mar 2010
yanno, i would hate to be on her bad side =x
Indigo_Miko (Chapter 8) - Sat 27 Feb 2010
The answer to the trivia question is 'Inuyasha Anonymous'. I read 'I Am Alpha' and 'We Are Pack' awhile ago and am so glad you started writing this one. I have waiting for it most axiously. The story line is great. I love how you've shown the group dynamic shifiting since the men went to war. I am curious as to what the men are doing thought. Will you have a chapter with them soon?
lol. Why do I have the feeling that one villager giving Kagome dirty looks is going to cause problems. Can't wait for the next chapter.
"Inuyasha Anonymous" is where the line for Round 6 comes from.
conflict with the village men? I see they will learn their place when coming up against kagome, Kikyo, and Sango. That will be interesting to see.
Jessica (Chapter 7) - Sat 13 Feb 2010
wont the girls have a tail for the boys when they return. and Souta and Rin are just so cute! please continue the good work!
I love candy stashes!! They make the world a better place. I can't wait for this story to start picking up again with some more action!! Till next time :)
REDWOLF (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Feb 2010
This is a fantastic story. Glad you updated!
Izzy [got to lazy to sign in] (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Feb 2010
Sweet chapter! I believe the that quote is from Painter in The Woods
sugar0o (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Feb 2010
amusing ^_^
Jessica (Chapter 5) - Sat 30 Jan 2010
Aw, Poor Kikyo, but she'll be fine. and awsome, Diachi can transform!
the line is from: The Demon in Me by Hairann and great writing! Keep up the good work! I am still in the second story (just joined recently) but really enjoying everything!
sugar0o (Chapter 5) - Sat 30 Jan 2010
mou i hope everything goes well ^_^
Wispr (Chapter 5) - Sat 30 Jan 2010
A nice filler chapter, as you said not much action, but each chapter dosen't need to have actions. I like how you got them getting things planned and organized.
Wispr
A good filler chapter. We find out that Daichi can transform already and knows how to hunt. Noticed one slight mistake in the chapter.
Kagome made her way over and removed the pot from the flames as she took a seat next to the fire to awake (await) her return.
Keep up the great work as usual. Can't figure out the quote. Know I read it before but can't remember where.
jojo661538 (Chapter 4) - Thu 28 Jan 2010
so far so good not that i had doubt keep up the great work ^_^
Jessica (Chapter 4) - Sat 23 Jan 2010
Aw, poor girls, I bet they're going to go crazy with worry. atleast sesshoumaru got hs moment with is son. Thankyou for your hard and good work, i look forward to reading more.
Wispr (Chapter 4) - Sat 23 Jan 2010
A very heartaching chapter, really liked how you captured the angst of the situation.
Good work.
Wispr
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