that was awesome naraku's hilarious!

Wow, wow, oh wow, you had my heart beating wildly there for the longest time. I like the way you got back at Kagome's mom she had it coming to her.  Imagine her setting things up to kill her own daughter.....   What a Bitch.....  The last three chapters I have to say was totally totally wicked in an awesome way.  Loved it update soon....

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I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE I ASK OF YOU THAT YOU UPDATE THIS STORY ITS SO GOOD THAT IT ENDED IN A PART THAT GETS THE ADUIENCES ATTENTION. THIS JACQUELIN WOULD BE AT MOST PLEASED IF YOU UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.

i love how u r writing ur story and would very much like to read more soon.

Please Continue!

I love the story!! I'm glad the only bitch in it is Kagome's so-called mother. XD

I love this. This is one of the best ones I've read in a while. I love the story and your writing style. update soon pls.

cant wait 2 see what naraku does 2 whatever her name is (kagome's mom), i hope naraku tortures her 2 death and i cant wait 2 read the story when kagome turns older like a teen or something. plz hurry & update ASAP!

Wow. This has got to be the most horrifying chappie that I've ever read (but in a good way!?) I don't think anyone has ever been able to make me cringe soo many times in the course of reading one chappie. And you say that you wanted to add more torture. The skewers and the scarab beetles really take the cake. T.T  That was so freaking disturbing on sooo sooo many levels. Good job at getting me really creeped out. Now I can't wait to read the rest of this fic. Keep up the awesome work. I think I like how you portray Naraku to me this evil person who has a soft spot for Kagome cuz it makes him a bit less scary but not by much. :P

this is a very good wonderful great story that i love and like a lot since i first started reading it and i was wondering if there were going to be more chapters to this story please because i really love it a lot and i was wondering if you are going to write more chapters to this really good wonderful awesome story that i love and like a lot and its also really interesting to read. your a great author who wrote this very great wonderful good lovable awesome story!

*looks for the author and offers free virtual cookies for an update on the story*

I am interesting in finding out whether Kagome's mom knows about her being a miko. And will you include kikyou and her dad in future chappies? Does Naraku keep in contact with Kagome's biological father? Do any of the other people at the party know how abusive Koon-Loon is to Kagome? Keep up the good work and update soon :P

please updata

oh i like this! though i do wonder how much older Sess is then her, other wise i cant wait to see more. - r0o

this is totally different, but omfg hahahahaha mr. meaty? hahahaha LOVE THAT!!! Good guy naraku rocks, even in a 'different way'- still kinda evil way.

awsome i hope you add more

I noticed how you said that Kagome was put in the west wing because she likes waking up to the sun. However, the sunrises in the East and sets in the West. I just had to point that out. Overall, I enjoy your writing style. I haven't seen many grammatical errors, which makes me incredibly happy. You seem to have a nice flow going. I'd love it if you had longer chapters though.       ^ - ^; Again, just had to point out that one directional error. Sorry. I look forward to your next update. My email is jamiefarrell@knights.ucf.edu if you feel like having a beta or something to that effect.

This is touching and well written, I'm enthralled with your fic. Thanks for sharing.

Awww another wonderful chapter i cant wait for ur next update. ^^ I completely understand ur reason for puting the story off for ur daughter. The next time u see her or speak to her tell her i thank her too its the least i can do for someone who protects me with their life; anyway cant wait for ur nxt update! ^^

I really like this story. I must say it deserves two thumbs up for originality; although, I'm still unsure if Naraku plays the good guy or bad guy from the scene where (I forgot who it was) that said that Naraku will use her to ride of hanyous and such. But I really like Naraku's character so far. I wonder if the next chapter will have Sesshoumaru in it? I hope that Kagome with be reunited with her father.

I hope your daughter is well. I found it very sweet to put her above everything else.