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Huh?

Hoh?

Hih?

Heh?

this is  a good story keep at it pleassssse!!!!!! i want to know were it goes

Great chapter as usual. Was really glad to see you update please update again as soon as you can.Take care

please updata

I'am loving this story.  I loved the first chapter and it was superbly written.  Please update soon.

Not a bad first try.  But please be careful with homophones, as they can be very distracting to your readers.  It may be beneficial to check around for a volunteer beta reader. :)

I really really like it so far!!! :) Very interesting, just one thing...

This is how poor is spelled not pore. lolz