gosh... i just read over this... it's really depressing. lol. If I were a random person I probably wouldn't leave reviews either.
At first the style of the beginning, being only dialogue, through me off. Then as I continued to read it I understood it better. It is very melancholy but when all is said and done, you successfully conveyed especially Kagome's emotions. Sessh is harder to figure out but there is the slightest bit of regret and loss.
| 