Reviews for Tag in the Rain by Ariel

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Snowfall (Chapter 10) - Fri 01 Jan 2010

Thank you for the two chapters.  I'm very ill so this review will suck.  I think I remember reading about the stress getting to Kagome, but I don't remember her being sent home.  Shippou is so cute (when he isn't acting spoiled), especially when he blurts out the truth that no one sees.  Aw, so sweet.  The part with Inuyasha's and Sesshoumaru's conversation was sad.  I remember that and have to wonder if they will continue to hate each other.  Thanks again for the posts!


Megan007 (Chapter 8) - Thu 31 Dec 2009

OH No!!!!!!!!!!!! awww and Kagome was having so much fun with him in a way talking to him about some stuff that were going to be in the furture, awww so sad, poor kags I really like this story it is so amazing, and funny, I hope you update tonight I can't wait to read more, oh and Happy New year to you too darlin

-_~

Megan


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 8) - Thu 31 Dec 2009

That was not a very nice cliff you left there, but none the less I enjoyed the chapter and am anxious to see what happens between the two next. I really enjoy how you make Sesshomaru independant yet with a sense of loneliness, also when he speaks with Kagome I appreciate that he actually seems curious and not just cold and unresponsive.


Snowfall (Chapter 8) - Thu 31 Dec 2009

Oh!  Now I remember!  This is the last chapter I ever saw of your story.  *sniffle*  Sesshoumaru is going to make her leave?  And it had been such a good day, too.  That just sucks.  I can't wait to see what happens.  *dancing from foot to foot, waiting*


Mskumiko (Chapter 8) - Thu 31 Dec 2009

ohh no poor kagome is geting fired or is she?? keep up the great writing Happy New year Ariel


1CarinoInu (Chapter 8) - Thu 31 Dec 2009

Now why would it be her last day?  Rin still has a lot to learn, or is Fluffy scared....?


Snowfall (Chapter 7) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

I don't know why, but I really like the last chapter.  Though there isn't any true action, it has the feeling of motion.  Rin is running about, Sesshoumaru and Kagome are walking, and at the same time, they have very interesting conversations.  I think you ended it on a good note.  We see the purpose in Sesshoumaru's mask, and we see that Kagome doesn't feel she can get past it.  At least, that's the impression I get from her.  I can't remember how the story progresses, so it's like reading it anew. 

Thanks for posting!  ^_^


megan007 (Chapter 6) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

I must say this chapter was a little bit of OOC of Sesshomaru but hey that is ok, the last chapter was super funny I loved it!!!, and I love your story it is so orignal I know I stated it before but this story is super amazing, and I must say I love the diffent titles you have!!! "Kind of like Alice and Wonderland" Titles I love it.

Hugs

I hope you update soon

Megan

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megan007 (Chapter 3) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

No.No. don't say that I though I reviewed the first chapter but I guess I did not so I am going to review this one, I like this story it is orginal and Sesshomaru does not seem that all Lovey Dovy crap thing right off the bat, in fact I like this sesshomaru I like how your story does not have them loving eachother in the begging but later on, I really do hope you feel motivated on contuning this story I really do like this!!!.

 

Hugs

Megan007

 

-_~


monica (Chapter 5) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

definitely reviewing!

Wow, I wanna be it!

I really like the world-history reference.

But, didn't other asians have some sort of spoon? you know, the weird-shaped ones they have at chinese restaurants. I may be wrong though.

loving, loving, loving the shirtless Lord. And the kiss was... D:!!

please please please more tagg ahead.


monica (Chapter 3) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

Ok, author's food!...Um...

Well i actually like the story a lot. Alice in Wonderland is a bit corny lately but you're not forcing it. And it does sort of fit the whole IY world. I love the tagg in the rain- with SESSHOUMARU!- when i read the title i thought she would be playing with the gang but i like the idea of tagging fluffy much better :)

Character interpretation's awesome, and i like your story-telling.


Mskumiko (Chapter 5) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

LOL now they are playing kissing tag


saiyuri06 (Chapter 5) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

I love the originality in this story; it is very refreshing.


Inusbabe (Chapter 5) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

Cute little story, I love the chapter titles but, number 5 confused me I thought she would get drunk or something.


Ceferadel (Chapter 5) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

hah!! Brilliant, fire away my dear kagome! And always remeber to shot a valued male prize off....mwahah


1CarinoInu (Chapter 5) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

Agh!  That was too cute :)  Quite a twist, I would say.  What a way to tag your opponent, hmm? I


hopuchan (Chapter 4) - Thu 24 Dec 2009

i love this story so far!


autumngold (Chapter 4) - Thu 24 Dec 2009

What an interesting story.  I like how caring Sesshoumaru is with Rin.  I can't wait to find out if he will learn to care for Kagome just as much.  Is there another reason why he wanted Kagome to come with him then just Rin's education?  Please post another chapter soon!  I'm so impatient to read more!  Hope you have a wonderful Christmas!


Lady Jade (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Dec 2009

OMG I love this story it is amazing and you have to know I not lying cause I never write reviews


Miss_Clockworks (Chapter 3) - Wed 23 Dec 2009

hmmm...this story is interesting! I like it, though I'm not sure where this little game of tag will go? ;) ok so maybe I might have an idea lol


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