I love it! Very well written and so intriguing that if you made any technical errors, I was so caught up in the story that I didn't notice them! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
You are going to be continuing this...right? Please say yes. I am loving this and I need to know more. Will she ever recognize or remember him? Do they ever get together? Does she find out anything? These questions must be answered!...Yeah, so basically, how about making it a chapter story *nudges with elbow* eh? eh?
Connie (Chapter 1) - Fri 18 Dec 2009
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