Reviews for Capital Offense by Oroyukae

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Yudelle (Chapter 13) - Sun 03 Jan 2010

Great chapter. I really love how you write.


Snowfall (Chapter 13) - Sat 02 Jan 2010

Oh man.  I feel so bad for Sesshoumaru.  And I'm worried that Inuyasha will get himself in trouble.  It would be so nice if Kagome could take off those bands.  Damn, I feel so bad for them all.


Silver Silence 89 (Chapter 13) - Sat 02 Jan 2010

HMMMMM!!! What on earth could he have been dreaming about????


Yudelle (Chapter 12) - Sat 02 Jan 2010

Awesome chapter like always. Keep up with the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter ;-)


TheWonderCage (Chapter 12) - Sat 02 Jan 2010

Why do I suspect that, that is going to come back and bite her in the ass? Oh what fun to be had! I can't wait!!


Tana_san (Chapter 12) - Fri 01 Jan 2010

I honestly believe sooner than later Kagome's true heritage will be found out by Sesshoumaru, if not by InuYasha. Either way, at least maybe he'll learn to accept her as she is now that he knows she's working there and he hears how people talk about her.(not including the ones who seem to like to pick on anyone who's kind) At least this was a first step in hopefully the right direction and Sesshoumaru will come to see that there ARE people who aren't as prejudiced as he believes. Happy New Year, Lady O...and to all others who celebrate this American holiday.  JEN


Sesshomaru (Chapter 12) - Thu 31 Dec 2009

I am thoroughly enjoying your story.  I usually don't like stories that aren't set in the cannon universe.  But once I started reading, I couldn't stop until I finished the last chapter you have up.  Please continue with this story!  I need to know what happens with Sesshomaru and the physical problems he's starting to experience.  And Inu sounds so cute...I always draw him with extra fuzz on his ears just like you describe.  Please keep writing this story and don't let it die like so many other great ones!


Snowfall (Chapter 11) - Thu 31 Dec 2009

Oh wow.  I wonder if Sesshoumaru's eyes had flashed red and he had been starting to transform.  It would explain his headache if the band is designed to kill him if he transforms.  This is awful.  I hope Inuyasha can find Totosai.  Can't wait for the next installment!


Midnight Cat (Chapter 12) - Thu 31 Dec 2009

Oh wow!! Not enough words, I know... But it was the only thing in my mind as I finished reading this chapter; the whole thing was rather...surreal.

I am glad that their first interaction after the whole fiasco the night before was handled in a much better way than I expected! I still think that Sessh needs to take the popsicle out, but I feel that perhaps he is learning to thaw a bit (wishful thinking?). I love the fact that Yash is not the only one who can sing about Kagome's qualities, and now there is Kouga who can sing her praises for the daiyoukai to hear!! Hahahahahaha!!

So...I am dying to find out what is that bad headache, her little power, and what Totosai has to say about the whole reaction from Sessh.

Thank you for the wonderful update! (The last of the year), I look forward to a new year of wonderful chapters coming from a talented writer such as you!!

Thank you again and may the new year bring you joy and happiness with no end in sight!

Hugs:

MidCat


Sess Koibito (Chapter 12) - Thu 31 Dec 2009

Well, they didn't actually call a truce while at work ... unless it was just one of those unspoken things.  Another great chapter!  Does Sesshoumaru know that Kagome is a miko now?  Seems like he may be close to breaking through the band sealing his demonic power & strength.  Is that why his markings have become darker?  Can't wait to read what will happen next! :)


Seshiepersonalpriestess (Chapter 11) - Thu 31 Dec 2009

I love how things are progressing.


Tana_san (Chapter 11) - Thu 31 Dec 2009

Seshoumaru is overcoming the control that the band is supposed to keep suppressed, ne? And it's always when he's in the presence of Kagome. It's like her inner power is calling his to the surface each time he argues with her. InuYasha is definitely on to it. This is getting quite interesting.  JEN


Yudelle (Chapter 11) - Thu 31 Dec 2009

Awessome chapter ^.^ Gods you have me hooked on this story. I hope you update soon. And thanks for updating it today, you're totally awesome.


Waterunleashed (Chapter 11) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

Someone's eyes bled red, I think Sessh need an inch thick band or maybe two inches. Honestly do the humans really think they can hold him at bay forever. I can picture it now, they are fighting and his eyes flash, and flash, maybe his stripes get a little jagged and it call out her miko powers. Oh man. Oh yeah and the headache, serves him right for boning Inuyasha's left overs. But I guess he has to truly hit rock bottom before he starts climbing back up.


Sess Koibito (Chapter 11) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

That's so evil! What happened to Sesshoumaru that is suppose to be impossible??? Please keep the updates coming! :)


Midnight Cat (Chapter 11) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

***Groan*** Oh man! That did not go well at all!!

Sessh really needs to cut the posicle act before he makes things worse!

I now await the first encounter between Sessh and Kagome at work!

Mwahahahaha!



Midnight Cat (Chapter 10) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

Oh Snap! Tell me that didn't happen!!! Oh poor Sessh!! I feel for the guy!! It just seems that he can't get a brake no matter what!! Now that little conversation about telling him that he was working with the same girl that just caught him with his pants down and the hand in the proverbial "cookie jar" is going to be quite interesting!! I am so looking forward to the next chapter!! Kuddos to thee my dear, for you are one amazing writer!!!


Ceferadel (Chapter 10) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

wow fluffy!! Man he was making a move and Inu just had to interrupt...  Fluffy is going to be pissed *Cef runs for cover*


Tana_san (Chapter 10) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

When living with a room mate or in this case a brother, always, ALWAYS keep your P.D.S. (I like that one, by the way) in your own room and away from possible interruption... That's what bedroom doors and locks are used for, duh! Don't most roomies have some kind of system for just these times like, I don't know, hanging a necktie on the door when you're going to be otherwise occupied?  JEN


Yudelle (Chapter 10) - Wed 30 Dec 2009

Love the chapter, especially the ending. That was funny. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up with the good work.


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